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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:14 pm
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So the daily prompt for this week is taking two primary colors, their moods/implications, and 'mixing them together,' finding the similarities and differences in their secondary counterpart. Critique as you like, but I wouldn't bother being too harsh. I'm barely editing these and they're extremely stream-of-consciousness. Let me know what you think, though. :3 --- Vibrance and sex. Physicality, intensity, and shock colliding. A single, guttural, orgasmic scream emanating from the throats of those who can’t speak their truth, their overstimulated senses sobbing with fear and anger. The shaking face of a fat, shiny boss, his bald head splotching. The essence searing its rude way through synapses, charring their walls. Insanity; if one with no senses dreamt, it would be first of red.
Rhythm, closed eyes, fluency. Peace, serene thought. Delving through layers of consciousness – settling the turmoil there. A girl-child laying in a garden, piercing the sky with like-hued eyes. Liquid notes slipping through the tunnels of thought, and circling back and around, spilling from the mouth. The dove-grey light of any droplet and rivulet snaking down a car window, replicating the plains outside, perfect and inverted in their truth. When the red fades, blue is there to absorb the wreckage.
<3RUFU
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 7:09 pm
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The Splendiferous Rufu So the daily prompt for this week is taking two primary colors, their moods/implications, and 'mixing them together,' finding the similarities and differences in their secondary counterpart. Critique as you like, but I wouldn't bother being too harsh. I'm barely editing these and they're extremely stream-of-consciousness. Let me know what you think, though. :3 --- Vibrance and sex. Physicality, intensity, and shock colliding. A single, guttural, orgasmic scream emanating from the throats of those who can’t speak their truth, their overstimulated senses sobbing with fear and anger. The shaking face of a fat, shiny boss, his bald head splotching. The essence searing its rude way through synapses, charring their walls. Insanity; if one with no senses dreamt, it would be first of red. <3RUFU
It was a bit difficult to stay with. It didn't really seem like you were setting out with a task; almost like that was just randomly congealed there with a tie up to red (I think.)
and also you said "daily..for this week" :p that threw me off for a moment too.
Would you mind elaborating just a little?
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 7:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 8:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 3:46 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 4:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:10 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 9:52 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 9:49 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:22 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:46 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 3:35 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:04 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:49 pm
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