how you feel when alone~a song~

[morbid-kittys]

im feeling like the ocean
feeling like the ocean
feeling like i cant break out
i cant brake in

cause i have nobody else
nobody to take care of me
to let me be free...

feeling so alone
feeling like a rainbow
so many things to see
but never apart of it

i know this feelings wrong
i know that i cant help it
watching from afar
waiting to brake free
something must be wrong
wrong with me

nobody really sees me

just a falling star
im falling to my end
such a pretty sight
that nobody understands

im feeling like the ocean
feeling like the ocean
waiting to break out
wishing to break in

 

[ElVl0]

its good but i think if u used the word comprehend instead of "understands" it would balance it more for u, still good job