No longer hear your voice!

[Otxanus Xanaphy]

When will this life end,
And when will it begin again?
It was great and fun.
But there was nothing to gain.

You were there for me,
And I left you for someone else.
You were there today to,
And I couldn't see anyone else.

"Why did you leave." You asked.
You started to fall apart.
I told you, "I didn't remember."
But you saw right threw my heart.

You fell to the floor crying,
And I couldn't do anything.
I kept trying and trying,
To stop you sadness for once.

But it was to late.
You were over taken with sadness.
I thought to myself.
"I should be thrcast into hells darkness."

I'm sorry for what I did.
But I had no choice.
When you would start to speak.
I could no loger hear your voice.  

[The Dadalorian]

you have like 3 different rhyme schemes, try keepin it all the same, or at most use 2 for a short poem like that
other than that...CAN SOMEONE POST A HAPPY POEM D;  

[walk like thunder]

Soviet Mudkipz

you have like 3 different rhyme schemes, try keepin it all the same, or at most use 2 for a short poem like that
other than that...CAN SOMEONE POST A HAPPY POEM D;

ok just because you asked i'll now post a happy poem! yes people, happy poems exist.  

[Otxanus Xanaphy]

Soviet Mudkipz

you have like 3 different rhyme schemes, try keepin it all the same, or at most use 2 for a short poem like that
other than that...CAN SOMEONE POST A HAPPY POEM D;

It sounded good to me so i didn't care.  

[Otxanus Xanaphy]

I guess no one likes it. meh