Beautiful Disaster.

[Tak-Jak]

We were doing anlysis essays and reports on the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" and after, I teacher posed the question.. "How would you die, if you could write your own death." Well.. this is mine. Kirby was Curious. So this it for her.

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The shadows hide her bruises as she sits in her corner. She dares not breathe, or utter any sound, just in case he would hear. Upstairs a glass shatters against a wall; another empty bottle. Thunderous steps are heard above and the alcohol-slurred yelling commences yet again. She pulls herself a little more into the shadows of the corner, of her heart; forcing these horrors from her mind.

Sea salt tears
trickled down to my toes
with memories of Absinthe
lingering from an existence
filled with honey pots and road maps.

I will travel to Iqaluit
and swim in frozen waters
hoping to wake my sleeping heart.

I wanted to stay away from her.
I wanted to forget her.
I was her. I am her.
…And it is killing me.  

[BlackHawkGS]

I loved "Stranger Than Fiction"!!! I saw it with my mom, but she though it was crap... stare

Hmm. This is interesting. You don't seem to write your actual death... but the cause behind it? Or maybe I interrupted wrong. Well, prompt or no prompt, I thought it was nice biggrin  

[Tak-Jak]

I am already dead inside.  

[BlackHawkGS]

Oh... heh... that makes sense sweatdrop

Hey, there's a reason I write comedy and adventure here...  

[KirbyVictorious]

As usual, I lovelovelovesototallywanttosteal your writing.

But c'mon Takky. *hugs* You're not dead inside. Cheer up. Kay?  

[Tak-Jak]

Im perfectly fine..

But I had to read this out loud in class.

Class Response: -dead silence-

Teachers Response: -dead silence-  

[The Splendiferous Rufu]

Oww. That really sucks. I've had to do.. things like that before. x-o; -pats-

You're not dead inside, sorry. Or you'd not be able to write so evocatively. Bravo - I loved the poem. Stunning images.

<3RUFU

 

[UsakoTenshi]

-dead silence-

>w<

I wanna write out my own death now! You've inspired me! ><;  

[KirbyVictorious]

YAY OMG LETS ALL GO WRITE OUR OWN DEATH NOTES

We're so cool.

Has anyone seen that anime?  

[The Splendiferous Rufu]

I've heard a lot about it. Not too into anime, though.

<3RUFU

 

[Voxxx]

It was beautiful. There's not much to say about something that's good. It just is.  

[Galladonsfire]

Sanity has a thin line.... when it breaks we break neutral  

[NovaKing]

KirbyVictorious

YAY OMG LETS ALL GO WRITE OUR OWN DEATH NOTES

We're so cool.

Has anyone seen that anime?

OHHHH your the one who told me about the show!

Ermmm... I'm sorry but I despised it for several reasons (mostly because it stated that it was better to kill off people who were doing awful things than it was to understand those people and possibly prevent those bad things from happening again.) So...yeah..

...Uhh....Hurray closure!  

[Galladonsfire]

NovaKing

KirbyVictorious

YAY OMG LETS ALL GO WRITE OUR OWN DEATH NOTES

We're so cool.

Has anyone seen that anime?

OHHHH your the one who told me about the show!

Ermmm... I'm sorry but I despised it for several reasons (mostly because it stated that it was better to kill off people who were doing awful things than it was to understand those people and possibly prevent those bad things from happening again.) So...yeah..

...Uhh....Hurray closure!

(hmm not sure how to quote here but here goes...) The funny thing is thats pretty much the point of the show. Its a battle between good and evil. The plot is that you have to decide which is good or which is evil. eek I personally thought it was a strong mind game of both worlds being of our own and the world of light.  

[NovaKing]

Galladonsfire

NovaKing

KirbyVictorious

YAY OMG LETS ALL GO WRITE OUR OWN DEATH NOTES

We're so cool.

Has anyone seen that anime?

OHHHH your the one who told me about the show!

Ermmm... I'm sorry but I despised it for several reasons (mostly because it stated that it was better to kill off people who were doing awful things than it was to understand those people and possibly prevent those bad things from happening again.) So...yeah..

...Uhh....Hurray closure!

(hmm not sure how to quote here but here goes...) The funny thing is thats pretty much the point of the show. Its a battle between good and evil. The plot is that you have to decide which is good or which is evil. eek I personally thought it was a strong mind game of both worlds being of our own and the world of light.

Good and evil are words based on the individual perception. Regardless, the show was uninteresting, and portrayed people as terribly simple beings including the supposed genius.

hmmm..