2 or 3 peoms:..: opinions anyone???

[P i k k u - C h u]

1st poem: tears

a touch upon my face
its wet
what is it?

blood?no
i look at my fingers
clear stuff

water?no

i taste it
a bit salty

tears?

that is undecided
what am i crying for
even i dont know

but for now
i guess this wetness will just have
to flow

my death cries

the damn pain is back again
tearing pieces
and splitting ears
cries of agony
rolling thunder
killed emotions
killed victims
i laugh
you cry
sorry babes
looks like you got ******** over

slasher (i wrote this from out of the blue; my fave)

i cut my wrists
one quick slash
anything sharp
good, make a gash
they think im crazy
i know i am
take a look at me
im mentally insane
problems all around
gotta find release
energy rise
temper descending
that feeling; exuberating
take a look
once; maybe twice
the slasher that i am
might be cutting again tonight  

[walk like thunder]

ok my dear, I'm sorry, but I just pissed myself laughing to that first poem!
my dirty, innuendo filled mind, interpeted it as something else!
sorry xd xd