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 Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:22 pm
Existing
I can't feel my heart beat
Yet I know it is there
It walks mindlessly, not moving to the beat of the music
The steady pumping of blood keeping my alive
Moving to nothing but existence...
It dances with no emotion
Just gliding back and forth
Behind the mirror of colors hides true self.
Shackles bearing weight in the mind
The fog hiding other's eyes to see my pain
I scream to them, but they not hear.
I call their name, but they give themsleves a new one.
The colors of my soul show them my emotions,
but they do not chose to be there
Look through the Window.
See me, lift me up, and take me into your arms.
I watch through the looking glass...
waiting for them to come, waiting for life
Water blinding my eyes, silence speaking in my ear
"Wait for them..."
Sealed with a tear
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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:57 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:46 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:03 pm
i liked it but i dont think i understood it. I get the feeling of lonliness but what is actually going on in this poem? srry slow moment. xp
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:43 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 12:50 pm
Very good structure ... I liked it ...
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 3:50 pm
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