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XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 3:43 pm
I've decided to write a script for a project I want to do, which includes games, now this script originally was going to have the title 'Never Mess with the Princess' since it was about Princess Peach from Mario, but then I thought, "That sounds puffy, I need something with a more arse-kicking twang to it." so I decided to try and think about a title, and poof, nothing.

For starters, I'd like some help thinking of a kick-arse title, but I'd also like to know if any of you lot have had problems thinking of titles for things..

I'll post the script here when I'm done so I can get some pointers on it.  
PostPosted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 6:32 pm
Most of my ideas for stories have ended up name-less because I am not the greatest at coming up with titles so sorry I'm probably not much of a help to you. sweatdrop You could do something maybe like "Wrath of the Princess" or something although that's a little like your old title...  

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H20edDownAzn

PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:01 pm
Roughly, what is the Princess going to be doing in this story? I can come up with some generic titles, but they probably won't be as good.

Silly titles:
Princess Roid Rage
Dial PMS for Princess (<Princess Peach Wears the Pants

A lil more serious:
To the Bloody Pit (an allusion to the pit inside of a peach)


Blah, can't think of anymore right now razz Don't forget to post a basic plot!  
PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:16 am
These are the plotlines for episodes 1-10

Episode 1: Will you marry me Peach?
Mario asks Peach to marry her, but she gets kidnapped by Bowser and Bowser Jr. and taken into Space. Mario goes out to save her and succeeds. Peach then accepts and then the two have a celebration. Luigi and Yoshi are there. They party for a bit until Peach finds something shocking in Mario’s cap.

Episode 2: Two-Timed
Peach finds a picture with a love heart border of Rosalina, she slaps Mario and yells at him, she feels utterly humiliated and leaves. Luigi and Yoshi looked shocked, and Mario pretends that Rosalina planted it there.
Peach comes back for revenge, she battles Mario but eventually gets knocked out.
When she starts to come round, she hears a sort of wedding music playing, she opens her eyes and screams.

Episode 3: The Wedding
The priest (Pit) asks Mario if he wants Peach to be his wife, he says yes. Pit asks Peach if she wants Mario to be her husband, she says no, and slaps Mario calling him a no good dirt lying two timing cheating b*****d, and then tosses him out of the arena.
Pit looks at Peach and asks her what that was all about, and she says that Mario knocked her out, brought her here and he’d cheated on her, Pit nods and agrees that she was right in doing what she did and then leaves.
Peach goes back to her castle and looks around dejectedly, suddenly Mario appears and he attacks her from behind.

Episode 4: The Final Straw
Peach retaliates and Mario begs for her forgiveness, she says that if he can beat her in a race then maybe she’ll take him back.
The two race and Peach wins by miles, Mario decides to knock her out again and nearly succeeds, but Pit arrives just in time to stop him, Peach and Pit fight Mario off, but Bowser arrives and tries to kidnap Peach. He brainwashes Pit and Pit attacks.

Episode 5: Snake I’m gonna kill you!
Peach screams and runs away from the attacking party. Little does she realise that all of the boys have been brainwashed by Snake. A flashback occurs showing Snake get the Lip’s Stick and hit them all with it, the effects only last for a week, and when the scene changes it shows Snake hitting the other boys.
When Peach returns she finds Snake attacking Mario, she says she’ll kill Snake, and she goes in for the kill.

Episode 6: Peach, it’s over
Peach defeats Snake and he runs off, Mario who just survived the attack tells Peach that it is over, since there are too many women in his life, and he can’t choose just one. Peach runs off in tears.

When she returns to the castle, she finds it under attack from Link. Not knowing who Link is, she battles him and defeats him. Then Zelda shows up and attacks Peach, the battle ensues, and then, there is a big explosion.

Episode 7: Peach’s Revenge
Peach survives the attack, but Zelda is defeated, Peach decides it’s time to defeat all of the brainwashed blokes, but she is sent back in time by a strange attack and has to race for her life as Baby Peach. She finishes the final circuit and is returned to normal, she goes to Snake’s headquarters and challenges him.

Episode 8: Who the hell are you?
Peach and Snake battle, throwing comments at each other for all of the match, then, a huge beam appears and a blue thing attacks them. Snake runs off leaving Peach, and some other characters to fight it.

Episode 9: Football?
After the battle, Bowser attacks, sending Peach into a football arena, she faces Bowser and eventually wins. Then Bowser sends her into the Olympic Games.

Episode 10: Is this the end?
After Peach wins the Olympics, she returns to her world and goes to her castle. Mario appears and asks her if she wants to marry him. She says no, and walks away.

There are another 10, but I need to come up with those plotlines....  

XGamerRichy


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:23 am
That's funny! 3nodding  
PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:40 am
blulife28
That's funny! 3nodding

Yay! mrgreen  

XGamerRichy


H20edDownAzn

PostPosted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 12:00 pm
Haha, umm... wow! I had no idea Mario was such a skank.

Titles:
The Chronicles of A Heroine Betrayed (or Besieged),
Princess Peach Takes on Freaking Everybody,
Kill Mario vol 1


I'll keep posting more as I think of them, or until you like one/come up with your own.  
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 4:47 am
Here's the next ten episodes I've got plots for.

Episode 11: A Shadow in the Night
Peach is walking home when something starts following her in the darkness, she tricks it and finds out that it is a Jigglypuff. The Jigglypuff attacks and Peach is forced to retaliate, a battle ensues and Jigglypuff is eventually defeated, then Peach discovers that some one is trying to take her life, and that person is closer than she thinks.

Episode 12: The Phone Calls
Mario calls Link, to say that Peach said no. Link is annoyed since he is in the middle of a battle with Ganon, and he hangs up on Mario. Mario then calls Kirby, Kirby is annoyed since he is in the middle of a fight with Dedede, Kirby yells at Mario and hangs up. Mario then calls Fox and the same thing happens. Then Mario calls, DK, Yoshi, Pikachu, Ness, Captain Falcon, Luigi, Marth and Sonic. They all hang up. Mario then calls Bowser, who actually talks to Mario… Bowser then says that it was Mario’s fault for being a d**k and that Peach should marry him. Mario hangs up.

Episode 13: Unlucky for Some
Peach arrives at the Mushroom Kingdom where she finds Mario sobbing. She talks to him and explains why she rejected the proposal, suddenly, Wario turns up and kidnaps Peach, she yells abuse at him and makes a reference to the Subspace Emissary mode. Peach eventually breaks free and defeats Wario to escape. She is then caught by Ganondorf, she beats up Ganondorf and then talks to the screen, she says that the number 13 is unlucky for her and she has no luck. However she has better luck than Zelda.

Episode 14: LUCARIO!
Peach walks into the Pokemon Stadium to visit Pokemon Trainer, because she needs to ask him about karts because Pokemon Trainer seems to know about that sort of stuff, but he’s not there, instead Pikachu and Lucario are battling. They see Peach and stop, Lucario says that Peach is disrupting a tournament, but Peach just asks where Pokemon Trainer is. Lucario tells her that he is in the other stadium. Lucario escorts Peach to the other stadium where she talks to Pokemon Trainer. Suddenly a flash a light separates the three characters, Peach yells for Lucario but nobody answers. She screams and the episode ends.

Episode 15: Pokemon Battle!
Peach wakes up in Poketopia, she yells at the creator and says that she’s getting dimension sickness, then she ends up in a battle against a girl called Daisy. Both of them look similar and Peach suspects that the girl called Daisy is Princess Daisy. The two battle, and Peach wins by a landslide and she is sent back to the normal dimension. Peach then says that she is going to take control of her life and not let some stupid director make her life hell.

Episode 16: The Princess’ Guide to Brawl
Peach starts talking saying that this is her guide to Super Smash Bros Brawl. The book has lovely red letters on the front that say “Don’t Wuss Out”. It opens and Peach starts reading out the entries, the first lot is on the characters. She laughs at parts. She only misses out one entry, hers, solely because she didn’t want to talk about herself. After all the characters are covered, she says a little about next time and closes the book.

Episode 17: Restaurant at the End of the Mushroom Kingdom
The Princess’ Guide to Brawl is seen, and then it opens up, Peach says that this time she’s gonna let the guide speak for itself, and let it talk about the stages in Brawl. Eventually she closes it. She visits the restaurant at the end of the Mushroom Kingdom and watches the spectacle, whilst protecting herself from the huge amount of shadow clones that decided to start attacking her, she defeats them all and opens the book again, it says bye and it is closed again.

Episode 18: Life, the Universe and Mushrooms
Peach appears on the screen, it’s just an image and Peach speaks, she says that the machine died, so they’re having to use images to create the movie. She laughs, “oh well, it means we can do what we want without you spying on us.” She giggles and then suddenly the picture fades into the real life. Peach groans, she has a go at the director and then starts talking about the meaning of life. She asks why we are in this world only to fight, can’t we have tea parties instead? She asks why do people enjoy using us to beat up our friends and she just keeps asking, then she asks what is the answer to Life, the Universe and Mushrooms. Mario walks by, “42”.

Episode 19: So Long and thanks for all the Mushrooms
Bowser walks into view, he looks at the screen, “So long, and thanks for all the mushrooms” he mutters before leaving. Peach appears, she asks what that was all about and sighs. We see the guide and Peach opens it, it talks about the assist trophies and eventually Peach shuts it.

Episode 20: Mostly Harmless?
The guide appears and opens up. An new entry is found. It is on Peach. It is very simple and has only four words in the description. Mostly Harmless by Mario. Peach yells and we hear the sounds of her pummelling Mario. She appears on screen and smiles. The entry is seen again. The description is erased and replaced by five words. Incredibly harmful when pissed off. Peach laughs and a music video comes on. Then the credits roll.  

XGamerRichy


H20edDownAzn

PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:46 am
Very nice homage to Douglass Adams. I at first missed the allusion to the hitchhiker's guide book in Peach's guide to brawl book. But I caught it after reading the title "Restaurant at the End of the Mushroom Kingdom"  
PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 11:02 am
H20edDownAzn
Very nice homage to Douglass Adams. I at first missed the allusion to the hitchhiker's guide book in Peach's guide to brawl book. But I caught it after reading the title "Restaurant at the End of the Mushroom Kingdom"

Well, I think when I thought of those titles I was in a very Hitch-hiker's guide to the Galaxy mood, and I thought that it would be nice to involve that in the story.....

Plus I really enjoyed the books, so yeah... sweatdrop  

XGamerRichy


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Crew

PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 3:33 pm
I like how you used a bunch of different characters and put them all together!! Nice job! 4laugh  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:52 am
Well, I plan on eventually filming it, and the main game that's going to be used is Super Smash Bros Brawl. So, I had to use those characters, and I thought it would create quite a funny story...  

XGamerRichy


XGamerRichy

PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 4:19 am
I finally has a title for it!

The Colour of Mushrooms! mrgreen  
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