I think it still lacks something. What do you guys think? I think It needs more trees in the background or something to break up the sky a bit more.
Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:44 pm
... nothing after an entire week? Sounds like I need to find a new guild. D:
Kappa-chan
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The_Time_Cat
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:33 am
hmmm, maybe you could add some more trees in between the two guys.:/
Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:51 pm
Actually, the only thing i could think of when i was watching it load was "Wow.. this picture is too hot!" I know that it's supposed ot be about summer, and you have that down pat, but what i need to see is some water to cool it down a bit. The people in it look like they might be on a beach somewhere, minus the guy in the coat. A splash, or a wave in the lower lefthand corner might do, or even a lighter cloud by the trees. Add a seagull silohette in there or something too.
Also, your glare is amazing, but it just seems like tere should be a sun creating it. You dont tend to get a glare in an overcast sky.
Thoes fiery clouds in the background are supurbly made, and the shading and color choices are phenominal. You did a great job on this picture.
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Shahmeran
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:13 pm
I love the figures themselves but the background feels more of like Dante's Inferno than a beach. Perhaps adding a few tree, adding more blue hues (even though I like that it looks like it's in the evening)
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