Since I like to write I'd thought I'd share some of my poems. So here's one I wrote recently. I would also appreciate some feedback on them. (thanks in advanced) ^_^
I Told You Not To Follow
by: Kevin
Your controlling ways smother me
Always clinging to my very being
Trying to make you the only one I see.
I try to create space
So we both my breathe
But still you insist always being face-to-face
I try to lock myself away
To relieve all your grief
I told you not to follow
But you do anyway
Now you see the blade
My arm covered with blood
The blade slowly receding
Now you never leave
That stare of sympithetic concern
It's because of you I'm like this
Guess you'll never learn
The Emo Guild
What do you think genius? Its a guild for emo's.
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