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Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:52 pm
Lily,

I'm tired of words; that desperate attempt to fill the silences.

I no longer want to deal out metaphors and allusions.
I want broad strokes and white space.
I no longer desire to describe what has already been created.
I want to fill the space, not the silence.
Words have become empty to me; everything is foreign.
I want to face the womb, not the mind.
Speak from the void, not the tongue.
Breathe in colour, not script.
But most of all, I want the burning to spread, cover, everything;
instead of turning to ash.

Lily, don't tell me anything.
Show me.  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 6:59 am
I loved this so much. It was beautiful adn simple and clean, and I could relate. Excellent job.  

KirbyVictorious


Serenity Reed
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:59 am
Wow... that's beautiful.  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:31 pm
Oh, the irony of this.  

d e s d e m o n o
Crew


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:15 pm
biggrin  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:11 pm
... but how did the priests die!? CLIFFHANGER!  

BlackHawkGS


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 10:32 pm
Oh Hawk... -shakes head-  
PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:04 am
Another uber-deep work of art wasted on our favorite cookie addict ^^

Alles gut.  

KirbyVictorious


Voxxx

PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 11:36 pm
Mm, this sounded vaguely sexual. But I never did get you, plus I just spent the night texting Mr. I-can-make-a-dirty-reference-out-of-anything, so ... yeah.

Pretty words.  
PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:25 am
Aren't I one to have sexual undertones in everything I write.

Good of you to catch on Voxxx. biggrin  

Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

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