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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:56 pm
I just finished this poem like 30 minutes ago. It still doesn't have a name. After you read it feel free to give some possible names that you think suits it if you wish. . .

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Unison of a kiss
Unison of a eternal bliss
Unison of a star
Unison but yet were so far

Together for now at least
Together for a couple days a week
Together as we are fills me with joy
Together as we are you treat me like a toy

Carry my soul past the borderline
Carry my life but get caught in the twine
Carry your new bride through the door
Carry me with no love and you'll drop me to the floor

United yet our bond has never been so weak
United we both know this but you don't care to freak
United no more you wanted to free me
United never again why did you leave me?


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:23 pm
It's really good  

blueroseayumi143


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:25 pm
Thank you 4laugh
 
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