2 POEMS I wrote tell me what u think.

[Ghost1124]

My life is the most horrible festering scab there has ever been on the face of humanity. It makes me sick to my stomach to even to imagine the torment I've been through. I want to weep when i think of what they have done to me while my heart is torn into pieces tears of depression drench my soul.


Just go to to my profile and tell me what you think of it.  

[Ghost1124]

Slowly my memories fade, soon I will not be able to recall anything
Everyday I look back on is only a blur
Your face is starting to be hard to imagine
All I can think about is how much I miss you
Your warm touch, the softness of your lips
All I have to remember you by is a few pictures
I can barely remember the sound of your voice
Barely remember the last time I said, I love you.  

[[Ashes][is][Ashes]]

"Horrible festering scab"?
Not a pleasant image.
Your second one needs a little work.
Try a pattern, or a scheme.

 

[Ghost1124]

[Ashes][is][Ashes]

"Horrible festering scab"?
Not a pleasant image.
Your second one needs a little work.
Try a pattern, or a scheme.

The first poem I wrote i was really mad at myself.  

[brenner682]

i love it tis grate  

[MargieMe]

i like them lots!