Critique Please

[PixelMuse]

I've been working on this piece on and off. Made several different sketches but this is the direction I'm going in.
Sayda`s 3 forms

This is the character I've based it on. It's a fan art of her character.
http://sayda.deviantart.com/art/SAYDA-17387304
http://sayda.deviantart.com/art/CHAOS-17969033  

[Lewd ASMR]

The lineart looks good so far. Very crisp and clean.

The character on the bottom right seems a little our of place due to the difference in body language from the other two. Maybe when you start getting it CGed it'll look better since I don't really know the story behind the characters.

The only thing that really bothers me is that from the reference links you gave, the braid in Sayda's hair seems to be on the wrong side. Unless she has two braids (one for each side), the reference shows it to lie on her left side while on yours it appears on her right. I took a look at another one of her pictures (Awaken) and it seems to be only on the one side.  

[Dark Bunny Lord]

Not bad, not bad at all.
Though as for critique consider your wrists, the upper right figure I refer to.
It's left hand works well, however it's right hand seems to meld right into it's arm, very little protrusion seperating the wrist from the palm. Also, her left leg seems to dissapear behind her thigh, might be good if a bit more of that was shown somewhere else as there's quit a bit of leg left which would be hard to completely keep from being exposed behind the other leg I would think.  

[japhers]

I have to say you draw very wonderfully! smile keep up the awesome work!!