Anyway, I'm working on a book, and it's going to take a LOT of editing, since I'm really bad at not putting in details and etc. Just that I'm not really good.
So, here's an excerpt:
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“What’d I say?” Kathryn asked me quizzically, and sadly, I was sure she was serious.
I turned away to get a drink, and replied, “What do you think you said?” So original, right?
“I don’t know, what did I say?” That wasn’t Kathryn. Definitely, since when did she sound like a guy?
Looking up, I saw Mr. Tall-Dark-And-Handsome cocking a side smile. Maybe Terry’s twin, with brunette hair and a gorgeous touch of perfection. Score!
“Mmmm…,” I hesitated as the bell for the next class chimed loudly, “I think you said that you’re going to be late for 2nd period.”
“That’s all right, I’ve got time,” he leaned over me, his deep eyes pierced into mine, and my heart thumped a considerable amount.
“Destiny!!” Jenny called from down the corridor, and I stepped back regretfully, and hurried off to Biology.
“Sorry,” I yelled back down, “is it alright to continue our conversation at lunch?” I pleaded for a positive answer.
“Fine with me.”
I could have sworn for a second there, that he voice was winking to me, and as I stepped into Biology, I spaced out, thinking about Terry and Mr. T.D.H., wondering if either of them was single.
I turned away to get a drink, and replied, “What do you think you said?” So original, right?
“I don’t know, what did I say?” That wasn’t Kathryn. Definitely, since when did she sound like a guy?
Looking up, I saw Mr. Tall-Dark-And-Handsome cocking a side smile. Maybe Terry’s twin, with brunette hair and a gorgeous touch of perfection. Score!
“Mmmm…,” I hesitated as the bell for the next class chimed loudly, “I think you said that you’re going to be late for 2nd period.”
“That’s all right, I’ve got time,” he leaned over me, his deep eyes pierced into mine, and my heart thumped a considerable amount.
“Destiny!!” Jenny called from down the corridor, and I stepped back regretfully, and hurried off to Biology.
“Sorry,” I yelled back down, “is it alright to continue our conversation at lunch?” I pleaded for a positive answer.
“Fine with me.”
I could have sworn for a second there, that he voice was winking to me, and as I stepped into Biology, I spaced out, thinking about Terry and Mr. T.D.H., wondering if either of them was single.
Hehe...Basically it's about a girl named Destiny, that in middle school and elementary, she was the loser, the freak that no one liked. And though she's changed, turned preppy and tried her best, no one seems to care, and treats her even worse.
So, then she finds out shes moving, etc etc etc, starts out fresh in Clintwood High, etc etc...I need to put more detail in my writing, though...
