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 Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:00 pm
*Kelly is at the mall trying on all sorts of clothes while Dokou on the other hand is sitting on a bench looking around with his arms crossed*
Kelly"Should I get this one or this one" She says seeing herself in the mirror.She then stops and turns to Dokou.
Kelly"Hey Dokou do you think I should get this one..." holds up a short dress that has spaghetti straps and goes down to her knees, "or this one" holds up a green dress that has long sleeves and comes with a jacket....
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Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:32 pm
There isn't really much to go on... But I would continue it... at least until others know what kind of story it is going to be... that up there could be anything...
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xXWhoWants2BNormalNeWayXx
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:29 pm
*dokou ignores her and continues looking around, Kelly sighs and goes back to seeing herself in the mirror*
K Guess I have to pick myself
*Soon Kelly gives up and they walk out of the store with 3 big bags of clothes, Kelly carries 2 of them while Dokou carries one. A girl wearing black with a mask on goes up to Kelly*
G “Give me your bags."
*She holds up a gun and points it at her*
G"I won’t ask again."
K “Well you'll just have to get your own."
G “Big mistake girlie."
*The girl slowly pulls the trigger, Dokou sees her pull the trigger, then shot fires Dokou throws the bags and runs in front of Kelly. He ducks and barely misses the bullet, he then trips her. The girl falls in shock. She spots the gun and reaches for it but Dokou takes it. She gets up and goes to punch him; she misses by a long shot.
G"Think you’re real smart but no one messes with me."
*The girl starts throwing punches but they don't even touch him.
G What’s with this guy I cant even touch him is he even human?
*She continues throwing punches then stops*
G I see he doesn't fight back because I'm a girl
G "Boy stay out of this this isn't your fight"
*The girl runs to him then spins and swings her leg, Dokou catches her leg and holds it tight*
D"I don't want to fight you." stare
*The girl stands their shocked stressed *
G this guy is definitely not human no one in the world can doge a bullet.
*The girl jumps and swings her other leg, Dokou lets go the minute she jumped and doges the kick. The girl lands breathing tiredly and heavily…
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:42 am
woah! at first i thought it was just a silly little story, but as i kept reading it turned out to be an awesome story. I say you continue it, no matter what anyone says.
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Posted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:44 am
Storys good but to me it feels like im reading an rp.
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