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 Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:16 pm
my first one is "me"
i'm like a doll that's missing pieces
a broken doll that can't be fixed
a defect
people pass me in the hall
and i pass them
are they invisible
or am i?
am i needed,
am i necessary,
the world dosen't care,
who lives or who dies,
great men and women
mothers, fathers, and childern
us
thats why people search for each other,
i can't seem to find my person,
So i should just lay down and
cry
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 10:11 am
lol you should have a new poll, that was an excelent poem.
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Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 5:08 pm
Bj-Slim lol you should have a new poll, that was an excelent poem. really?
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