Yes or No (help)

[StephieBbabiez]

I am writing a story right now
and it is really long (well to me it is)
its a rough draft. So the description isnt that great yet i will add more
but should i post it on here
im having big trouble with dialogue
it jus sounds to much lik he said she said  

[penandpaper67]

I think that if you're having trouble with it, you should. If you know you can make it better before posting it, do so, then post it.  

[StephieBbabiez]

thanks I will correct as much as i can then i will post it thank you