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reckless2000

PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 12:10 am
my poem
you cant make me eat that

u cant make me eat that ots slimy,and goggy,and yuckly and ucky its gresse and guely it look like u mad it from maggots and mud some chop hipptoumis bugs heads and blood.

i hate i hate i hate it bits just thinking about i givin me fits one taste and i certly i instly die u cant make me eat that so dont even try blaugh smile razz  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 11:03 am
uh...
...?  

ii_NiKKi XD


Demonic Sealer

PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 3:14 am
While the war of the beasts brings about the worlds end the goddess descends from the sky,she guides us to bliss her gift everlasting.  
PostPosted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:52 am
Title: If I Ruled the World

If I ruled the world 12 year olds kids could drive
If I ruled the world hobo's would have their own holiday
If I ruled the world everyone could go to college
If I ruled the world girls could play Pro. Baseball with the guys
If I ruled the world every gender could be a NFL player
If I ruled the world everyone would go on GAIA  

teira99


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:55 am
Demonic Sealer
While the war of the beasts brings about the worlds end the goddess descends from the sky,she guides us to bliss her gift everlasting.


hey thats preety good blaugh  
PostPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 9:59 am
reckless2000
my poem
you cant make me eat that

u cant make me eat that ots slimy,and goggy,and yuckly and ucky its gresse and guely it look like u mad it from maggots and mud some chop hipptoumis bugs heads and blood.

i hate i hate i hate it bits just thinking about i givin me fits one taste and i certly i instly die u cant make me eat that so dont even try blaugh smile razz


what are you trying to do???? write a poem? ok a few tips, if you suck at poetry like me, instead of thinking up one randomly, you should wait until a poem comes to you from the heart, than you will be able to create good poems not randomly rymed words.  

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Funky_Mocha

PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 4:06 am
erm.. this poem is bout fwens and family. It does nt seem lyk a poem to me tho... hope u can accept it biggrin

Friends and family is all i need
Although keeping them together is hard indeed
Time flies when they are with me
Making me go 'gee'
When i am sad
they comfort me
making me kinda glad
before the time we are together is gone
i would cherish them n wish tht all may be gone

- end-

Its abit weird i think. it is all jumbled sweatdrop  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:53 pm
i posted this in a contest already...

so i decided to take it a step further


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sorry if its hard to read sweatdrop  

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The-Broken-Smile

PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:43 pm
I have to poems ones a little silly and ones a little seriouse....

Food (you can tell this is the silly one)

its not my fault
that i like salt
i like mustard
on my custard
and it might sound rude
but me like food. cheese_whine


forgive

stand in my heart and see through my dreams
stand in my eyes and sew up the seems
fix my memories
fix my heart
fix my feelings
because they'er falling apart
my heart will always be broken in two
but i will always forgive you heart  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:21 pm
Awh I loved the forgive one
ok heres one of mine i admitt i think it sucks but my friend said it reminded her of a soap opera or something but its really bad so please forgive me....i wrote this after i read a story that i thought was sad and it inspired me biggrin

I lay in bed
Tears falling down my face
The words you said
Will forever be stuck in my head

The terrible good-bye
When you left my side
The way you walked away
Will always make me cry

You don’t want me anymore
I’m nothing special
Just some old news
Why want me when you can have the girl next door

I now see you with her
My heart tears apart
The tears leak through my eyes
And I drop to the floor

I cant live with out you
Your everything to me
You’re my life my world my sun and more
Why don’t you feel that way about me too

You tell me to forget
Its all in the past
You say we should’ve never been together
And its all a regret

Your words hit me harder then before
Its time for me to leave
This world has no place for me
I don’t want to live if you don’t love me anymore

I pick up the gun
And pull the trigger
The memories are everywhere
Of times when we had fun

There’s nothing more
When blackness over comes me
Just my dead corpse…
Laying on the bathroom floor

You see me there
And you cant believe
How stupid you could be
Why did you ever say you didn’t care

You think about the times when we were together
You realize you made mistake
You cant live without her
But now she’s gone forever

There’s only one thing to do
To make you happy again
And that’s to pull that trigger
So you can be dead too


Everything’s all white now
And you know your in heaven
When you see a goddess
Stand before you and bow

She welcomes you there to this place that feel so fake
With a kiss on your check
And a hug so great
You whisper in her ear and tell her you made a mistake

It all turns out okay
When your in this place
So happy and sweet
What can be better then when your with the one that makes your day  

KimixKupkake

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