Another line

[XxUsagiMaruhiXx]

Could you hear?
When she screamed that frantic cry.
Did you care?
That she wanted to die.
Did you feel,
for a moment,
her goodbye?


Did you know?
The darkest of her fears.
Can you taste?
All her over running tears.
Could you think,
for an instant,
this could be real?



It's just a tragic line,
another cryptic rhyme.
She's just wasting your time.
She'll be fine.
She'll be fine.



Did it hurt?
When you found that bloody mess.
Were you afraid?
When all the truth was addressed.
Did you remember,
every time,
her words confessed.



It must feel good.
To see her pain from such heights.
You must be proud.
That you haven't know that strife.
Don't be so sure,
any moment
this could be your life.




It's just a bunch of lies,
A thousand bleeding cries.
The world tore out your eyes.
This is goodbye.
This is goodbye.




Another line, to assure you I'm still here.
Another rhyme, will persist despite the tears.
Anther time, a second glance, things become clear  

[redwolfshadow]

Thats awesome... I suck at grammar, but the wording is cool!  

[Bryan Son of Wolf]

simlpy great you are talented the reason i say this is because you can actually feel the emotion and almost view the scene