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 Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:08 am
This is a poem I wrote. It's sad. All my poems are sad. I don't know why. Well, tell me what you think!
I love the way you look at me
The way you tilt your head like it's all OK
and you smile
like everythings the way it should be.
I hate the way you laugh at me
when I try to do something good
but in your mind it's always bad
The way it's not ment to be.
Love and hate
good and bad
right and wrong
simmilar and different
Was this ment to be?
an original
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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:08 pm
i liked it, i thought it was really really good!
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:15 am
thanks for commenting! (yippee, first comment!!)
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:45 pm
wow, that was amazingness ^_^
keep it up, i totally understand how you're feeling!
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:51 pm
Actually, this above situation in my poem has never happened to me, things pop into my head at random, but they are all sad, if not unusual. The ideas beg to be written, so that's my job. To get these ideas onto paper (or type and post them) and share them with the world.
Thanks for commenting and constructive (non-violent) critisism would be apreciated! Thank you!
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:35 pm
I like it very much! You should definitely keep writing! lol i keep commenting on other peoples work, no one seems to comment on mine T-T oh well~! your poem was lovely!
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