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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 5:24 pm
finally! i couldnt draw for a week! god! btw about this piccy. i used the cover of a rurouni kenshin manga. so i kept the long thin style that watsuki-sama uses, that i kinda have in my own style anyway^^ so enjoy and please comment for me^^ this is also on my devart. so thats what the little message on it is about^^ 
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 7:06 pm
o yeah... if you guys could rate please? thatd be nice heart
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2005 7:28 pm
I like her outfit and I like the wings too. 9/10
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 8:55 am
AbstractAngel I like her outfit and I like the wings too. 9/10 thank you!!! ^^
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:35 pm
yheey, for an end to Artist's Blooock!
Anywayssss, Nice job. That wing though...I'm not sure it would hold up. It needs more muscle in there, so a thicker frame (I know this only because I made the same mistake) and adding smoe smaller feathers in a slightly darker grey would give it goodness. If you added something to that staff, I don't know what, it might have more depth. It looks a tad flat when I look at it. I can't put my finger on why either. Cursesssss. The hair, hrm, the highlights are numbering too many. it looks like her hair is striped. Theres my two and a half cents. biggrin Keep up the work Ryv!
I still envy your coloring skills. I cannot, I repeat CANNOT color it so it looks good on the computer. In real life, it looks spectacular (I flatter myself), but the second i load it onto the computor, the colored pencils become hellish. Anyway.
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:58 pm
It's very good that being said;
Hair: all the highlights you have in your toons hair you should shrink them a lil they take over the while hair and take away from it.
Wings: the wings look fine although they look a lil starched up and a lil too straight, you can fix that by making it a lil more curvy and rounder.
Clothing: The clothings good until that flap near hte wings it looks too stiff but that's it and it's really good
Staff: the staff's fine
Hands and Legs: a really good
Face: Face is good ^^
other then that I really like it.
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 2:09 pm
K33n yheey, for an end to Artist's Blooock! Anywayssss, Nice job. That wing though...I'm not sure it would hold up. It needs more muscle in there, so a thicker frame (I know this only because I made the same mistake) and adding smoe smaller feathers in a slightly darker grey would give it goodness. If you added something to that staff, I don't know what, it might have more depth. It looks a tad flat when I look at it. I can't put my finger on why either. Cursesssss. The hair, hrm, the highlights are numbering too many. it looks like her hair is striped. Theres my two and a half cents. biggrin Keep up the work Ryv! I still envy your coloring skills. I cannot, I repeat CANNOT color it so it looks good on the computer. In real life, it looks spectacular (I flatter myself), but the second i load it onto the computor, the colored pencils become hellish. Anyway. thank you o yes. the wings. theyre intentionally small. i usually cant STAND cherubic wings.. they make me go ickkkk but i thought maybe.. just this once.. id give it a go. thank you for the other comments tho! i didnt notice any of em and now that you mention them, i have to agree with everything you said! ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 2:12 pm
Kelmur It's very good that being said; Hair: all the highlights you have in your toons hair you should shrink them a lil they take over the while hair and take away from it. Wings: the wings look fine although they look a lil starched up and a lil too straight, you can fix that by making it a lil more curvy and rounder. Clothing: The clothings good until that flap near hte wings it looks too stiff but that's it and it's really good Staff: the staff's fine Hands and Legs: a really good Face: Face is good ^^ other then that I really like it. thank you! yes im still all nOObish at wings. i dont really draw them much anymore^^ faery wings > angel wings ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 2:33 pm
Dragonfly wings> Faery Wings.
Oooh I love them, lawl. Even though Fairies do sometimes have wings like that, butterfly style wings are usually used. Yeah, wings ARE a pain in many ends on my body. But you are doing good. I should hire you to color my artwork or something.
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