walls set high

[Bryan Son of Wolf]

With the walls set high I gaurd my heart from a false love,
In hopes to never feel grief and sorrow caused by love and hatred,
With walls set high i wonder weather the path I chose was by fate or my will and if this love I chose over my friend was the one that I am really looking for,
With walls set high i seal away my soul and wither away into an endless sleep only to be awaken by the end of this endless dream of me and you,
When I awoke a year later I found you by my side crying but as soon as you saw me you ceased and hoped that I had'nt seen you cry,
With walls set high I wonderd why you would cry and never leave my side for a year
Then I felt as though I had been blind my whole life to not see that you were my angel from heaven sent to save me from oblivian,
With walls set high I cry since I waited to long to reveal my true emotions and how I felt toward you
With walls set high I wander the cross roads of my fate and when the door to light nearly closed I saw you holding open the door waiting for me
so that we may cross over to heaven hand in hand

the story of my life  

[Ekeanyanwu]

Hmmm....

Maybe try spacing out your stanzas a bit, so it's easier to read, like:

"With walls set high I guard my heart from a false love,
In hopes to never feel grief and sorrow caused by love and hatred..."

And, I can't stress this enough. Be more literate, clean up your spelling mistakes, proofread! It really does make it look better, instead of having to read it over because you're not sure that's a word or not. sweatdrop

Thanks~  

[Bryan Son of Wolf]

thnxs its just that i was in a hurry to finish cause we were about to leave