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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 10:30 pm
At long last, after months of tweaking, I've FINALLY got the design for my character down. Constructive critique maybe?
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 10:41 pm
Very Nice! I like the runes(are they runes?) on the blades. There is 1 thing that bothers me though....maybe it's me, but the section of his right arm at the elbow looks a bit disfigured. From my point of view it looks as if the inside of his elbow has a bone sticking out. If i'm correct, the inside of the elbow(The side closest to your body) is concave right?
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 12:18 am
I like it alot....good job!
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 7:42 am
AbstractAngel Very Nice! I like the runes(are they runes?) on the blades. There is 1 thing that bothers me though....maybe it's me, but the section of his right arm at the elbow looks a bit disfigured. From my point of view it looks as if the inside of his elbow has a bone sticking out. If i'm correct, the inside of the elbow(The side closest to your body) is concave right? Yeah I agree, and I might just be crazy but the head looks just a little too small too me.
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:35 am
theres great detail. i agree with sinful, that the head could be a bit bigger. same with the weapons xd *shrugs* weapons should always be way big 3nodding and i don't think you have to add the lines in the arms to define the muscle...i think shading that in to show depth in the 'cuts' would be better.
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Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 8:16 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 9:22 am
That's great. I'm not too sure what's going on with his arms though because it looks bony and skinny yet muscly at the same time and they look a little long. Other than that it's great
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 7:24 pm
I love the design of the weapons. Very cool. However, the arms seem a little too muscular for their lankyness, or if you want muscle, they're a little too long. The head is a mite small. Good amount of detail and overall, I like it.
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