Grave yard Dance By: Celeste

[Celeste_Nightshade]

Here we are in the graveyard together.
Never to be apart.
Take my hand in yours,
step with me,
as we take our leap.
Embracing in eachothers arms.
Falling into the Abyss.



Dalysa Zinsmaster Feb. 6, 2007

 

[R0bot0]

Free verse poem again. Nice form, though it needs some texture in what's going on.  

[Celeste_Nightshade]

I just realized how many I had in the free verse...this one was really quick...I always thought about going back and bringing more to it...but time kept getting away from me XD  

[Zalgoain]

it's like a quote. it's very quote like. short and uh... bittersweet? yes, bittersweet because it reminds me of like two lovers comitting suicide in a graveyard at like midnight.  

[tealflower1928]

i think its beautiful. it reminds me of two people falling in love and taking the leap of faith over what seems like life and death. thats amazing. in fact its bringing tears to my eyes... now im blubbering over its beauty.