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Unmei_no_LaLuna

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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 3:44 pm

I'd love to get some comments and critiques on this piece... ^_^ I consider it to be between 85~90% completed for a line art.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/26401101/

Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:01 pm

good perspective but work on your proportions more
other then dat, good jorb.

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Unmei_no_LaLuna

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Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 5:50 pm

...... how do you put perspective in a Collage piece?

I was hoping who ever reviewed it would give more detail as to where they feel the piece needs more work.

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 6:32 pm

I think it's really looking good! It'll look nice when it's finished. The only thing that's not right in my oppinion: the figures standing with their backs toward eachother. (On opposites sides of the page) The one holding the pot, her neck is a little long.

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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 7:09 pm

Sigma_Brixton

I think it's really looking good! It'll look nice when it's finished. The only thing that's not right in my oppinion: the figures standing with their backs toward eachother. (On opposites sides of the page) The one holding the pot, her neck is a little long.

Thanks I'll look into fixing that soon

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 7:39 pm

Laluna_Wulf

...... how do you put perspective in a Collage piece?
I was hoping who ever reviewed it would give more detail as to where they feel the piece needs more work.

sorry
im just a stupid high school student
sorry if i wasnt specific enough
but i did mean what i mean, the proportions on the people arnt right
thats all i was saying, otherwise it was a really good
but sorry for interupting

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