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 Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 5:24 pm
Pleas feel free to post any of your original works of poetry of lyrics to songs you wrote in this forum. Poetry allows you to express the darkest desires of the soul to the mundanity of everyday life. This is a forum to for you to share your personal observations. Or just post a song you find truley amazing and want to share wih everyone so it can be discussed!
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:15 am
You told me I was the only one,
Sweet little Angel,
You should have run!
~Alice in Chains: Love, Hate, Love
Down in a hole,
Feelin' so small,
Down in a hole,
Losin' my soul...
I'd like to fly,
But my wings have been so denied.
~Alice in Chains: Down in a Hole
A dead issue, don't wrestle with it, deaf ears are sleeping
A guilty bliss, so inviting (let me in), nailed to the cross
I feel you, relate to you, accuse you
Wash away us all, take us with the floods
Then throughout the night, they were raped and executed
Cold hearted world
Your language unheard of, the vast sound of tuning out
The rash of negativity is seen one sidedly, burn away the day
The nervous, the drifting, the heaving
Wash away us all, take us with the floods
Then throughout the day mankind played with grenades
Cold hearted world
And at night they might bait the pentagram
Extinguishing the sun
Wash away man, take him with the floods
~Pantera: The Floods
Reverend, reverend
Is this some conspiracy
Crucified for no sins...An image beneath me
Lost within my plans for life....It all seems so unreal
I'm a man couldn't half feel this world...Left in my misery
~Pantera: Cemetery Gates
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:51 am
This song has been stuck in my brain its called "Big-a** Rock" from the broadway musical the full monty. Check it out and let me know what you think. youtube
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:24 am
Depeche Mode - Home
Here is a song
from the wrong side of town
where I'm bound
to the ground
by the loneliest sound
that pounds from within
and is pinning me down
Here is a page
from the emptiest stage
a cage or the heaviest cross ever made
a gauge of the deadliest trap ever laid
And I thank you
for bringing me here
for showing me home
for singing these tears
finally I've found
that I belong here
The heat and the sickliest
sweet smelling sheets
that cling to the backs of my knees
and my feet
I'm drowning in time
to a desperate beat
And I thank you
for bringing me here
for showing me home
for singing these tears
finally I've found
that I belong
Feels like home
I should have known
from my first breath
God send the only true friend
I call mine
pretend that I'll make amends
the next time
befriend the glorious end of the line
And I thank you
for bringing me here
for showing me home
for singing these tears
finally I've found
that I belong here.
I don't know why but i love listening to this song, It's sort of dark but not overwhelmingly so and I like the style of depeche mode as is.
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Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:49 am
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Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:50 pm
well what can you do better, Frau I love nightwish and within temptation you "acceptable music" is a very limited category
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Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 3:52 am
HEAVEN
[Untoned]
With happy thoughts of none, and sad thoughts of everything.
In symphony of the lost morning wind, and aura of night's loneliness.
My seventh song composed, all thanks to sensei for teaching me how. Credit goes to him, as always.
this would be the last time, last time i said and it will be
to bid farewell to life, to everything nice i see
i'm never good with goodbyes, tell me, who isn't
when life's been the best and you enjoy the rest
yet time is frail, breaks me into pieces and stop me beating
makes me yearn for more where nothing's left and all is gone
[Chorus]
where is heaven, point me somewhere else to go
when my eyes grew dim, when i yearn for light but there's darkness
let me find heaven, be with me somewhere
be with me in this lonely journey, walk me home
to where you are is heaven
let this be the second time, the second time to breathe again
to feel the breeze cooler this time, better than it's been
i'll be good with goodbyes, i'll be a person who never cries
when hell freezes over and we'll escape together
yet i am bound to loneliness, tears me up so well, i'm losing
makes me desire to find heaven somewhere far, it's where you are
[Chorus]
where is heaven, point me somewhere else to go
when my eyes grew dim, when i yearn for light but there's darkness
let me find heaven, be with me somewhere
be with me in this lonely journey, walk me home
to where you are is heaven
make me forget how many times, how many hours have passed
to forget the rain was cold and i'll keep walking
i'll say my goodbye and be fine with that
when i doze off to sleep forever, secured in your arms
dreaming to see your eyes staring at mine
and everything's new, just like heaven, just like you.
farewell, my sweet heaven, i'll never be home
for i've lost you, my joy, my soul, i've lost heaven
let me find heaven, be with me somewhere
be with me in this lonely journey, walk me home
to where you are is heaven
to where you are is heaven
to where you are is heaven
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:22 am
This is just something i was pondering while listening to Still Doll by Kanon Wakeshima...
Why is it that roses represent love, when roses always wither and die?
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 2:47 pm
because they are sweet and beautiful for a time but in a few days they are dead and gone just as romance and love last for mere momenst but they contain nothing of substance. Atleast that is how I feel, I have yet to see any evidence for so called "true love" there is no love only people you are able to tolerate, and just like roses which have throns that will hurt you so too do the people that claim love for us hurt us deeper than anyone else
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:50 am
I made this poem myself.
"Separation"
When a moon is full, what is to become of the man?
When a sun is blocked, what is to become of a woman?
In time of time, oh spring, oh spring,
will war make us happy? or will peace bring depression?
It is what we call the Great Separation.
I am born, from the ashes of no phoenix, but the ashes of a fire that never burns out.
I am dead, by the hands of a God, that executes all.
In space of space, oh winter, oh winter,
when is the life, or when is the birth?
It is nothing that we come to the worse.
The second part was a little off but it looked to me it was ok.
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Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:02 am
Intersteing but it also seems very disjointed I am not sure if you meant it to be like that or not though
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Posted: Sat May 01, 2010 2:57 pm
this is a great song if you have a sardonic sense of humor. i love you all so much I thought I would share it with you. Big a** Rock This song Slaughter your world this is hysterical
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 12:10 pm
So you left,
So you broke my heart...
Because you did,
I now understand...
I can be,
Strong without you...
You never,
Did love me...
This is good,
For both of us...
It's a second chance,
A new beginning...
I never needed you,
You never needed me...
This is where,
Our paths separate...
I can be strong without you,
Thank you.
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:10 pm
You say its alright, let the words flow.
The same as the sun would rise and the moon would wane, let it pass, let it go.
The poison that has corrupted your mind.
The poison that has seeped into your soul.
It's no longer your battle to fight, you said.
That war of words, that has corroded through wrought iron skin.
Now the cause of your slow decay, let it pass.
It is all you repeat.
Allow yourself to dream.
Slumber into that sky full of silken amber that flow toward the setting sun.
It is time.
To inject the smile you once knew back into your face.
To cut away that unwanted saddened baggage that lay upon your side.
Who says that by the gates you cannot reside?
It's never to late to ridden the slithering snakes.
Full of venom and lies.
There's nothing left at stake.
You see the stars? Every single one, a glimmer of hope.
Look at them closely and they will light a path.
Follow, follow through the velveteen ladened sky full of diamonds.
It will take you home, away from the hatred and the wrath.
Your words, like a waterfall, majestic yet treacherous.
They made sense.
It's that one wish you've asked.
For me to follow that river not down, but against.
Every crashing tide, Every swirling pool.
You asked a task of going back up.
Right to the mouth of it all.
Though with out a lip it speaks the truth.
That lake, you sent me to.
My body no longer cascaded with anger.
My mind no longer in doubt.
You're right, what have i to lose
Original Work by: XandarRiley
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