WIP please give any suggestions.

[Callie.Star]

This is an image I'm doing for an art contest. Right now it's just really sketchy line art. I don't want to ink it until I'm sure I'm done. I just wanted to post it here and see what you guys thought of it. It's a lot better than the first sketch I posted in the guild...heh.



I haven't even began to attempt shading or anything yet, but I plan to. As previously stated, this is a work in progress.

Note - the reason the mouth is shaped a bit funny is because she's blowing...this will be more obvious in the final product.  

[Michie_x33]

it looks kool!..u added a lot of good detail...but i think you should add more affect to the hair...and the lips look kinda funnie XD its basically good =]  

[shoushirei]

Pretty good so far! Try to add more detail to the shoes (they look a little... flat) and the hair. Good job. biggrin