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-Adasu Yasami-

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 2:37 pm
This pill that I swallow,
it helps to relieve,
a darkness so blinding,
a love that I grieve.

I'll start to get tired,
my eyes will get heavy.
and deep in my dream,
I'll be yours if you let me.

But only in sleep I'll experience this,
Your touch,your warmth,the infinite bliss.
So I'll slip into darkness,
with the pill that I pick,


It's my journey to you,
You're my Narcotic  
PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:43 am
I like this a lot, I suppose your talking about someone you really love.  

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:34 pm
very emotionally and very expressive and yeah it good mrgreen  
PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:58 am
Ryu dragonheartz
I like this a lot, I suppose your talking about someone you really love.

Hmm, I thought it sounded more like it was talking about the drugs someone takes to relieve themselves of the depressed feelings that they feel at losing someone they love(apologies if that was the love you were speaking about. It seemed to my that you were talking about the poem as a whole).

But I suppose that it could be taken to be talking about someone that that the depressed person finds comfort in.

*Edit*

Actually now that I've thought a bit more, it could be referring to sleeping and dreaming of the lost loved one or something else that incurs a feeling of bliss.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:10 am
wow that understandable it must be hard for someone to lose everything they had. they need some help and comfort. understand that it like a feeling feel empathy for someone  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:36 pm
i know it must be hard. i understand. it very emotional with sadness. great work keep up the good work. can't wait to read your new poem  

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 5:36 pm
very deep and very dark and etc with emotions mrgreen and filled with angry and sadness at the same time  
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