Goodnight Kiss

[Shy Risktaker]

I held you in my arms that night,
the night your soul drifted out of sight.

I saw you ignore all my pleading.
I saw you continue bleeding.

I saw you stop breathing.
I felt my anger seething.

I begged you "Please don't go!"
Why you left me I'll never know.

Despite my screams, you closed your eyes.
I kissed those lips that never told a lie.

You fell through my fingers.
Your every kiss and touch lingers.

I remember your beautiful scars.
I remember the nights spent under the stars.

You promised you would never leave me.
Now I know you can be free.

I remeber that last kiss, that last sigh.
I didn't realize you had kissed me goodbye.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

wow it very sad and very detail good work very emotionally great job  

[Shy Risktaker]

Hehe. Thank you ma'am. I'm glad you like it.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it made felt like i was there see everything happen watch what is happen between someone and the relationship that is my opinion  

[Shy Risktaker]

Heh. Yes well, that is mainly my point. See, in poetry or in any sort of artistic form, the writer is trying to get the reader to see in their own mind what the story, poem, ect. is explaining. So, thank you my dear. I'm glad you seem to understand what I speak of.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

yeah i know because you have talent miss which i am amazing by it u should make a book of your poetry and publish i think it would be good for others to read your poetry this my opinion so everyone can read yours  

[Shy Risktaker]

Awww.. My dear, you are too kind.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

i know but since you have talent it not bad to publish it because it would nice to have something new out beside Stephine Meyers already have her book out but i could try something new by reading one of the new book that has your poetry inside a book that they should make a movie of it depends if your up to it.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

well there is pc cast book is good beside Stephine Meyers it not really a copy or stuff it just different  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

well anyways hopefully u can make a new poetry stuff can't wait so yeah  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

my siren angel
that beautiful voice so melodic
it very soothing like a valley in the mountain
it brings calmness to the people who argue over a lot of things
it wants peace on earth
no more fighting on this planet
no more blood shedding
why do we have to sacrifice our own life
many people died without a reason to fight for
why we whom to death devil that seek nothing but blood shedding
to others who have suffer the most
that siren angel will be the light
to save us from our doom
that beauty of melodic voice
will bring peace on earth
no more fighting
let the spirit of joy come
the siren angel
peace on earth and everywhere it goes

hope u like i tried  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

soft light as a feather
even lighter that velet blanket
very sweet kind
generous and very thoughtful
still as fox is sly as cleverness
while the wind blows your hair that is slow as silk clothing  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

your eyes gentle as phoenix feather
your mouth very soft and moist
your nose of those lines as a mountain
your arms are like warm as a castle to protect me from anything from bad stuff
your like a hero that could protect a princess from her sadness that bring her happiness in life