My Poetry

[clm640]

Please rate my poems and tell me what you think. I'm only going to do one at a time but I'm going to archive them. Tell me what poem your commenting on so I don't get confused in the future. Thanks for your help.

 

[clm640]

Life

It's cruel
It's happy
It's short
It's long
It's rewarding
It's unmistakable
It's disapointing
It's wasted
It's hated
It's loved
It's wonderful
It's giving
It's God's gift to you

 

[linkster3769]

that my friend is a job well done  

[clm640]

linkster3769

that my friend is a job well done

Thanks.  

[midnight_wolf_dream]

Very good! 3nodding  

[daddylatrell]

Very relatable!
Nice job!  

[clm640]

Thanks. I didn't think it was very good but it was probably just that feeling writers have towards their work.  

[daddylatrell]

You shouldn't think that.
And even if it was bad, (Which it's NOT)
There's always room for improvement.
It's a common fact that writers, artists, musicians, ETC. never feel that their work is complete or good enough, even when it is.
So don't worry cause I've been down that road.
Seriously though, it's fine. mrgreen  

[clm640]

Thanks. I think you just gave me inspiration for a new poem.  

[daddylatrell]

No problem!
I look forward to reading it!  

[clm640]

NEW POEM

 

[daddylatrell]

Great job!
You have true talent, hehe.  

[BearUppercut]

I have a poem on my Sig yay  

[clm640]

@Simp: Thanks. I think that just making up poetry in this guild has seriously helped me improve.

@Bear: That's good. Did you write it?  

[daddylatrell]

@clm: Yeah, me too. It's great practice.
@Bear: I didn't even notice that. redface You're talented!