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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:36 pm
Hello!
I'm simperson (Lenni), and I'll be posting my poems and lyrics here.
Please, constructive criticism only.
Thanks!


Rainfall
The smell of wet pavement lingers
As Mother Nature lets her hair fall
A sweet smelling rain.

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Spring Time
The scent of golden lemons,
The ladybugs frolicking gracefully;
It's all happening as the grass tickles my palm
And greets me to spring.

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Boom, Boom
Boom boom, I protected you.
Sniff sniff, I cried for you.
Crack crack, you broke my heart.
Bump bump, I still love you.
Boom boom, you stepped all over me.
Bump bump, I still love you.
Boom boom, I died for you.
Sniff sniff, now you're crying.
Crack crack, now you're hurting.
Boom boom, you still love me.

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Strawberry Fields
Braided lemon grass overshadowing my worries,
Farm animals in a daze.
The scent of pine and strawberries
Tingle my stressed emotions
As I lye on the blanket of despair.
Crushed dreams fade away ---
I have entered the strawberry fields.

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Graceful Ballerina
Salmon colored slippers tap anxiously
Along the chestnut floor.
Her innocence wrapped up into a bun, not a hair out of place.
She puts on a smile for the show,
Because that's all she knows.
She is the graceful ballerina,
And that's all she depends on.

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The Perfect Ken Doll
You're eyes are drenched in lies.
Your plastic heart can't be broken,
For you are the perfect Ken doll
In my collection of 2nd Grade toys.
You think you're so cool,
But guess what?
I threw away my toys a long time ago.

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Life Is A Game
What am I to you?
I'm your personal rug you can step all over.
I'm your carnival act, I'm here to entertain.
In your mind, you're God.
You're the king and the rest of us are
Pawns on this little chess board.
But what happens when we call checkmate?
You aren't king anymore.
Sorry to kill your pride hun, but you never were.
Life is a game and your moves aren't slick enough.
In my book, you're no way in HELL better then the rest of the board.
So go ahead, control your kingdom.
But keep in mind, I was never in it to begin with.


I know, they may be short and sometimes incomplete.
So advice and pointers is loved also! <3

 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:46 pm
Bumperz to the extreme.
 

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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:01 pm
Bumperz to the extreme.
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:01 pm
I loved Boom, Boom. The onomonopia's added great effect to the story's meaning. It's amazing.  

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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:05 pm
Why, thank you!
You don't think it needs some work?
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:16 pm
No. It's PERFECT!  

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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:18 pm
Haha, thanks!
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:34 pm
I posted a new poem.  

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:01 pm
Bumperz for you!
 
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:02 pm
Bumperz for you!
 

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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 4:40 pm
BUMP; new poems coming soon!
 
PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:04 pm
Strawberry Fields was so sweet and innocent and set me in a time where the sun is warm and the grass is green =]] Really fantastic poem!

Life is a Game, I love the "I'm your carnical act" that's really a thoughtful line, it's great how you avoided cliches.  

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daddylatrell
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:15 pm
Miss_Comet
Strawberry Fields was so sweet and innocent and set me in a time where the sun is warm and the grass is green =]] Really fantastic poem!

Life is a Game, I love the "I'm your carnical act" that's really a thoughtful line, it's great how you avoided cliches.

Thanks, all of my friends seem to like those two! blaugh
 
PostPosted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:46 pm
New poem! Sorry it took so long, I need a little brainstorming time... sweatdrop
But yeah, according to my ELA teacher; lyrics are a form of poetry.
Enjoy!


Long Road

[Verse 1]
You held my hand, tucked me in.
You held me close when I was crying.
Never knew I would take this so hard.
Like a flower and a bumble bee
We were united so perfectly.
Never knew we would end up apart.

[Refrain]
I need the strength to survive.
I’m missing a piece in my life!

[Chorus]
Now you’re gone, now you’re free.
And I’m a bird with broken wings.
Holding on to the memory’s heart
It doesn’t really seem to get me far.
These wounds I have, they haven’t healed.
I still need you to be my shield.
But this is now and that was then.
It’s a long road ahead until we meet again.

[Verse 2]
Our love was like the candle light.
You lit me up all through the night.
But now it’s dark, and the flame has gone down.
Our love was like a dreamless streak,
Various surprises and differently unique.
But now it’s gone, and it doesn’t seem to come around.

[Refrain]
I need the strength to survive.
I’m missing a piece in my life!

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
You said you would never leave
They said you still had a chance
But now I stand here and I grieve
My depression is enhanced
You were everything to me
You were my one and all
I believed, oh I believed
You’re looking down and watching me fall

[Chorus]
 

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ada9

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:00 pm
oh wow and you didnt even sing that t me...tthe lyrics arre good .....and ur poem on top was prettifulll i like the first on and the second one  
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