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One of my poems tht i wrote a few months ago

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Mayumi Kuniyuki

Lonely Lover

PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:20 pm
You left me
Now i`m all alone
Left in the corner
In the dark

My heart slowly turning to stone
Every minute you leave me here
By myself
You see my tears
But you pretend to not see it
I know deep inside
You care

When i try to reach for your hand
The darkness forces me back
And i slip back into the dark
Now i`m slowly fading in time
Soon enough you will think of me
As a mere memory, a thought never to be thought about
Just a person in the past

But in me
You will always be there
When i`m finally gone
Will you finally think about me?

Will you say you finally love me?
But for now i`m trapped in a empty,soulless world
Where all is dark

When the winds blow
You here me whispering into your ear
Saying i love you

When i fall
You feel the soft touch of my lips
Giving you a last kiss

And all will fall when i do
Your world will crumble into ruins
And you say...
I love you...always  
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:02 pm
plz just tell me ur opinion of it =D  

Mayumi Kuniyuki

Lonely Lover


daddylatrell
Crew

O.G. Noob

PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:45 am
Hmm, nice rhythm!
I can tell that you put alot of feeling into this.
Great job!
 
PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:44 pm
I really like it! It has a nice rhythm and a great personality behind it. I also like the actual meaning. To sum it all up, It's great!  

clm640
Crew


Ice-Kitty472

PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:15 am
I like it ALOT! Wonder what you've been through hum.... sweatdrop just kidding, Its a really nice poem. heart  
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