what do you think of this plz comment

[planet-lover4er]

wind can be strong so strong that you think you can fly but when you jump off that building to prove you can fly all you get is pain, pain that might destroy you in more than one way so why try to prove something that you know is impossible to do and will never happen why risk so muuch pain for a berif second of happeness. yet so many people do it and i won't have known why entill things happened to me and now i get it so jump off that buliding if you think you can fly cause maby you can but if you give up you never will be able to and if you can't pain is a better feeling then feeling nothing at all.  

[MeetMeOnTheDarkside]

wow...i love that, i like how it stared off saying how its impossible but then it got really nice, i like it alot, good job  

[SophieMorita]

That was beautiful and it really described the ways of trying the impossible and turning it into the possible.  

[Jayde_Viveca]

this is really good. it describes a lot....  

[serjtankian_is_god]

What I read;
wind can ~blank~ be so strong ~blank~ you can fly ~blank~ jump off that building ~blank~ all you get is pain, pain that might destroy you in more than one way so why try to prove something that you know is impossible to do and will never happen why risk so muuch pain for a berif second of happeness. yet so many people do it and i won't have known why entill things happened to me and now i get it so jump off that buliding if you think you can fly cause maby you can but if you give up you never will be able to and if you can't pain is a better feeling then feeling nothing at all.

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{~blank~ = skimmed and missed a few words}
{ strike = to many grammatical errors for me to even attempt reading} < Or I have ADD and cannot focus right now...