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[Peasley]

A potential danger we all possess,

Like containing a raging fire.

Hearing the flames crackle within,

Like a misbehaving choir.

This feeling is Anger,

We all know it well.

It is a deep determination

That no calm can quell.

Anger is a serrated mask

That fragile faces hide behind.

The mask hurts almost everybody

And leaves the wearer blind.

Anger is your shaking fists

That leave so many bruised.

You beat them with your problems,

Giving them those problems, too.

Anger is your heart's defense

As it tries not to break.

But more cracks on your heart

Is all that Anger will ever make.  

[R0bot0]

Good use of alliteration, and a rhythm which isn't too rhythmic but is still good. The theme is a little too over-used but I liked the poem. Good job.  

[Peasley]

XSK Ambrosia

Good use of alliteration, and a rhythm which isn't too rhythmic but is still good. The theme is a little too over-used but I liked the poem. Good job.

Thank you, Ambrosia! I honestly didn't expect anyone to respond so quickly to my post...