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Snicketfile2014

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:15 pm
You talk like we listen
You talk like we care
You rant
and babble worse than a brook
Then when we don't listen you raise your voice
and question our friendship
as if to say we are horrible people.
We say we've heard it all before
We warn you that we won't listen
but you continue on anyway...
We could write that
we don't care in black sharpie
on our bodies, but you never
never catch on,
we drop hints
we comment
This is when we stop listening
We don't stop caring
Just stop and think for one minute
"Am I listening to my friends?"
The answer is "no"
But you don't care
Your subconscious mind says
"Talk some more, they won't mind!"
But we do.
We do mind
When we don't listen you raise your voice
and question our friendship
as if we are horrible people.
But we aren't
if anything your the horrible person.
Why?
Because you would question our friendship
over your stupid obsessions.

This is about a girl I met who loved to talk about her obsession, which happened to be The Beatles and Monty Python//  
PostPosted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:37 pm
wow it very in depth it sound like betrayal why someone would do that and get annoys the same things happened again  

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:10 am
that is good details you have up it is great and amazing  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:28 pm
Thank you so much for your feed back! (:  

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:55 pm
sure np madam. hope to see more of the writing poetry stuff i like it so far. keep up with the good work  
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