Since I have seen no indication that this is not allowed in this poetry forum, and since I would like to keep all critiques in one place (and further, be notified of them), I direct you all to my poetry collective in the Gaian subforum, Original Poetry/Lyrics, as given in my signature under the title of "Pst... I have a secret". There you will find dada poetry, some more "normal" poetry, and other experimental pieces. Constructive criticism encouraged.

Thank you! ^^