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 Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:12 am
 So, anyway... As much as i love comments, I need the critique. smile Thanks.
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 10:23 am
shes got a flat face, break up the outter curve of her face to give her cheek bones
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 11:36 am
Nyed shes got a flat face, break up the outter curve of her face to give her cheek bones Okay, Thanks. ^-^ I'll work on that. *procratinates more*
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:16 pm
Her face is like a perfect circle. So yeah, look at your own face and see what curves, and make the necessary changes. Her ear on the right looks too close to her eye.
Also her nose is too short, and her eyes are a bit too far apart.
Her shoulders look bulbous, and her neck looks wide (there's no line on the left indicating it actually ends somewhere). Her breasts are also very saggy (though you might've been going for that...?).
Phew, hope you can handle all that crit. xD Just basic anatomical problems, pretty easy to fix up.
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 3:52 pm
her eyes are too far apart.
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Posted: Sun Jan 08, 2006 5:59 pm
Tawney Her face is like a perfect circle. So yeah, look at your own face and see what curves, and make the necessary changes. Her ear on the right looks too close to her eye. Also her nose is too short, and her eyes are a bit too far apart. Her shoulders look bulbous, and her neck looks wide (there's no line on the left indicating it actually ends somewhere). Her breasts are also very saggy (though you might've been going for that...?). Phew, hope you can handle all that crit. xD Just basic anatomical problems, pretty easy to fix up. Thanks so much. ^.^ I'll look into fixing all of that.
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Posted: Mon Jan 09, 2006 3:07 pm
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