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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:00 pm
heyo, so i'm starting an Underground Music Collaboration with a friend, and i've been made Lead Songwriter. i'm sharing the first draft of some lyrics and plans for our fisrt song with you guys for opinions. it ain't finished yet, but i am thinking that Ian will be having some things to say in the song as well.
You Don't Know by ~Twilight16Master
(Blues Guitar Intro)
(transition to Main Rythm)
when you tell me that i'm being a grump i don't have any excuses but when you tell me that i'm immature it makes me just wanna lose it
cause you don't know what i've been through you don't know the things i do you don't know what it's like for me you havn't seen the things i've seen
acting like you know me but you don't even know my name your mind couldn't handle the truth i could have put you in your place
(Guitar Riff)
you don't know me you don't know who i am i never said a damn thing, you just don't understand cause you think your so hard, for ******** being harrassed have you had to try to avoid a cap in your a** you couldn't live like i do you wouldn't last one day and if you talk the talk you better watch what you say or backup your s**t your words are big, but your not so why don't you step up, and show what you got if not, then shut up i don't need your s**t i've got enough ******** problems, and your making a deathwish
(Ian's Rap)
(Antiphony [Call-&-Responce] Rap)
(Southern Rock Guitar Solo)
(Ian's Singing)
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:46 am
got a new song.
Freedom & Equality
Circling above on the wings of a dove I see the state of the Nation And throughout the Ages we Spoke from the Pages But we ignored the guiding Principles
Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality
And though I still try I just can't seem to find A trace of human Compassion For if we all Shared and we also all Cared We would Prosper and see no injustice
The Dream we share is one of Respect and good Living But how can we have that if we infight Competition with eachother's not Patriotic It only keeps us in the dark
Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality Freedom and Equality
(Solo)
(i had a few lines here that i didn't write down, i'll remember them again soon)
(Breakdown)
Circling above on the wings of a dove I see the state of the Nation....
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Chieftain Twilight Captain
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