Seasons

[Snicketfile2014]

Tis silent.
silence is bliss
tis winter
nothing but quiet
as the snow falls
nothing but quiet.
time to think.


Tis bright!
brightness is beautiful
tis spring
nothing but color
as the flowers bloom
nothing but color.
time to breathe.


Tis warm.
warmth is welcome
tis summer
nothing but warmth
as the sub beats
nothing but heat.
time to relax.


Tis colorful!
colors are welcome
tis fall
nothing but colors
as the leaves fall
nothing but colors.
time to live.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very well detail of each seasons of how well they work. like it  

[Snicketfile2014]

Thanks (:  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

np madam. so anything new you are going to add on your poetry love it so far.  

[Snicketfile2014]

Well I don't really know... I was working on a few... But I don't know where they are going yet...  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

oh it okay you write next about different kind of emotions that people have some to help of an idea  

[Snicketfile2014]

hm... sounds interesting..  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

well it describe a how a person feel by using angry or sad happy and joy of mix emotions feeling with description what do you think  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

sort like how you feel on a daily basic in your life.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

how others interact with others beings  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

those are the details of emotions hope your interested in writing it.
either way it your poem i let you decide. i will enjoy reading it