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Snicketfile2014

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:51 pm
You have said live life to the fullest.
Live it like tomorrow is your last day.
Do what you dream in your wildest dreams
Don't let fear hold you back.
Have that spontaneous moment of creativity.
No one can crush your dreams.
You said all of these things to me,
then you left forever.
Sunny days and cloudless skies
just don't compare to the time well spent.
Now I know...
You are living your wildest, craziest dreams,
and they go on forever.
You are in a pleasant place
where rain tastes like soda
where clouds are cotton candy
when night falls, you can see the stars
and touch the moon.
Where grass is neon pink
and dogs purr.
Because you are in a place where dreams really do come true.
And I am envious, but the way you got there...
The way you arrived is not to be treasured.
It was cheating, to me and to you.
Taking a razor like knife
in one quick motion.
Then I realize.
You aren't living your wildest dream.
You are living your worst nightmare.
Where when it rains, it burns your skin.
The clouds are always gray.
When night falls it falls hard
There is never a moon.
Where the grass is dead
Dogs are vicious.
You are living a nightmare,
and you deserve it.

I finally got my laptop to connect to the internet so I can get to my poems (:

Sand is falling, time is runnnig low.
Death is unescapeable
seemingly far yet unnaturally close.
Golden it falls, with a calming:
~swoosh~
The timer, almost empty.
Things left unsaid
feelings unknown.
Falling
falling
falling
through the glass.
Sands of time
falling too fast.
Slow down!
Please!
There is so much unsaid
Things not understood.
Sands falling
faster
faster
faster.
STOP!
My life is unlived,
I need more
ti--
Father Time
floats down
to you and your hourglass
and he whispers
serenely
"Life is never unlived,
time cannot be stopped,
regret nothing my child."
Nothing to regret?
Imposable.
It's too late.
You are gone
time has run out
and there is no getting it back.  
PostPosted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:57 am
it good it has a twist of madness of being at someone and going back in time to fix something this my opinion  

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:27 am
it very in depth and etc and plus a lot of emotions in there  
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