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Sapphirianna

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 5:43 pm
What is beauty to the blind?
What is music to the deaf?
Who sees God's true design?
Who hears the sounds of nature?

Who has been blinded by the world's materialistic fete? (It's a word, yes)
Yet who has deafened their ears with deception?

What beauty is there to behold in a black and white world?
What music is there in the sound-scape of machinery?

Tell me again who is blind,
And who is deaf?

Sight is overrated,
Sometimes immoral,
Sometimes deceiving.
To listen is to see,
But is seeing to listen?

Hearken to the word of your God,
Do you see now?

Is a rose so beautiful in a woman's hair?
Or is it majesty in the folds of nature's grasp?

Tell me yet again who is deaf,
And who is blind?

What is true beauty to the blind of this world?
What is music to the deaf of this world?  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:01 am
Sapphirianna
What is beauty to the blind?
What is music to the deaf?
Who sees God's true design?
Who hears the sounds of nature?

Who has been blinded by the world's materialistic fete? (It's a word, yes)
Yet who has deafened their ears with deception?

What beauty is there to behold in a black and white world?
What music is there in the sound-scape of machinery?

Tell me again who is blind,
And who is deaf?

Sight is overrated,
Sometimes immoral,
Sometimes deceiving.
To listen is to see,
But is seeing to listen?

Hearken to the word of your God,
Do you see now?

Is a rose so beautiful in a woman's hair?
Or is it majesty in the folds of nature's grasp?

Tell me yet again who is deaf,
And who is blind?

What is true beauty to the blind of this world?
What is music to the deaf of this world?


That's beautiful!  

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:40 am
It's good. Though it would be better if it had some rhythm to it. A trochaic, rhombic, or iambic pattern, and a letter pattern.

Sorry, I'm very strict with my own poems emo  
PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:06 am
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It's good. Though it would be better if it had some rhythm to it. A trachain, rhombic, or iambic pattern. and a letter pattern.

Sorry, I'm very strict with my own poems emo
me too and i agree. but it's really good. th meaning is beautiful. smile  

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:34 pm
I only read the 1st Stanza to know this is AMAZING. I think you re-triggered my poetic muse...  
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