My art! (critiques encouraged)

[FANGwoof]

I haven't uploaded anything to my DA for a while but here's some examples of my work. Feel free to give me some tips to improve my skills. :3
From newest to oldest:
http://razorscab.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=0#/d2okj4r
http://razorscab.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=0#/d2oibb9
http://razorscab.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d2lr93v
http://razorscab.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/d20xqh2

Also, if anyone wants commissions we could probably work something out.  

[Takashi_The_Dragon]

Your art is a hell of alot better than mine....  

[Venom Schatten]

Well, it's good ^^ but I found a little "problem".

The "problem" is: there's no/few shadows/light on your arts D:. Of course, if you make more shadows and lights, your drawings will be more beautiful wink

I suggest you do the lineart with thicker and smoothed lines. The result is great =)

Here's my dA: http://deathwizsaturno.deviantart.com/gallery/ (plz watch o I will watch back)
And sry for my bad english ;x

(EDIT: and I like yaoi too 8D)  

[Dark-Velvet-Revolver]

it all looks very nice... my da

http://moatswimmer-inugrl.deviantart.com/  

[FirionTheDragon]

nice art for all of you heres my DA:
http://firionthedragon.deviantart.com/
im not too proud of my art but hopefully its good  

[Dark-Velvet-Revolver]

those are nice ^^ try inking the lines and coloring them also use unlined paper its a curse!!!

use computer paper or Sketch pad paper ^^  

[FANGwoof]

Wow, all of your galleries are really good! I'm definitely adding all of you when I stop being lazy and start using DA again. It's pretty bad when your friends at school are like "I haven't seen you on DA in a while."

Anyway, here's my most recent drawing.