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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:19 pm
Looks like this place hasnt been touched since last time I was in here (barley that is) sweatdrop
Two of my male oc's ten years younger making them 7 and 11. The 11 year old is laying down the 7 year-old is ontop of him. Having lower body troubles.. and angle troubles..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-109.jpg

Except these ones, there just catching up in case anyone is actually interested in looking at any of my art: (from most recent, to least recent or so)
Last one I did, never finished updateing it..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-103.jpg

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-101.jpg Never finished background.

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-92.jpg Never updated the one with his face, but I cant stand how his face turned out. I love drawing his hair though ^^

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-85.jpg I named him Jayce xd

and thats all I want to post sweatdrop

(quoting me gets my attention more, otherwise I tend to forgot. Ima Slacker scream )
nuff drama for now though biggrin

Two more ^^
I love him mrgreen
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-169.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-168.jpg  
PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 8:57 pm
They seem... too add for me. I would suggest making some simpler drawings to actually make your drawings with more acuraccy. the third one looked especially odd to me, and most are unfinished. The angle on the last one looks good but the face... is hmmm. I don't really get his face.  

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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 3:50 am
That last one.. I accidentally gave him a black eye and never fixed it sweatdrop
I do have the finished drawings for them, I just never uploaded them..

I got tired of simple drawings though, I got stuck doing the same stupid pose every drawing.
Praciticing on getting out of that, and I know, none of my poses look normal xd

(Cool Avi ^^)  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 9:33 am
I can see your problem. Anatomy issues. Do some figure drawing, or draw yourself in the mirror. It doesn't have to be super realistic, just keep proportions in mind. "How long is my arm compared to the rest of me?" (When your arms are at your sides, the hand reaches roughly mid-thigh) "How wide are my shoulders relative to my head?" (Your head is one third the width of your shoulders when you're an adult. Toddlers and children have wider heads)

Once you start paying more attention to proportions in real life, cartoon anatomy will become easier and more natural for you.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 10:07 am
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I can see your problem. Anatomy issues. Do some figure drawing, or draw yourself in the mirror. It doesn't have to be super realistic, just keep proportions in mind. "How long is my arm compared to the rest of me?" (When your arms are at your sides, the hand reaches roughly mid-thigh) "How wide are my shoulders relative to my head?" (Your head is one third the width of your shoulders when you're an adult. Toddlers and children have wider heads)

Once you start paying more attention to proportions in real life, cartoon anatomy will become easier and more natural for you.


Cartoon anime is not the style I am going for.

These drawings are somewhat old.. so yeah, all the anatomy on them look horrible mad p
Thanks  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 10:32 am
Vanna1994
Dolly Dahlia
I can see your problem. Anatomy issues. Do some figure drawing, or draw yourself in the mirror. It doesn't have to be super realistic, just keep proportions in mind. "How long is my arm compared to the rest of me?" (When your arms are at your sides, the hand reaches roughly mid-thigh) "How wide are my shoulders relative to my head?" (Your head is one third the width of your shoulders when you're an adult. Toddlers and children have wider heads)

Once you start paying more attention to proportions in real life, cartoon anatomy will become easier and more natural for you.


Cartoon anime is not the style I am going for.

These drawings are somewhat old.. so yeah, all the anatomy on them look horrible mad p
Thanks

No matter what you're going for, the advice is still the same. People naturally have terrible memories when it comes to vision. We can remember the general idea of what a horse looks like, but when it comes to the muscles, texture of the skin, and size of its parts relative to one another, well the details become a little muddled. Also, foreshortening is really difficult to do from memory. xp

You're off to a good start, but getting the basics and foundations are what's really important.  

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 3:24 am
I thought 1,2, and 4 were amazing mrgreen 3 & 5 were pretty good too but not up to par with the other 3. All around though I think you aced it (whatever it is that you could of aced, not sure it just seemed like the thing to say)...  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:31 am
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I thought 1,2, and 4 were amazing mrgreen 3 & 5 were pretty good too but not up to par with the other 3. All around though I think you aced it (whatever it is that you could of aced, not sure it just seemed like the thing to say)...


xd
Well, these are pretty old sweatdrop
So I dont see how any of them are amazing..
I slack on posting my updated work in here.
Think I will pose a couple pictures now though.  

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:33 am
Vanna1994
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I thought 1,2, and 4 were amazing mrgreen 3 & 5 were pretty good too but not up to par with the other 3. All around though I think you aced it (whatever it is that you could of aced, not sure it just seemed like the thing to say)...


xd
Well, these are pretty old sweatdrop
So I dont see how any of them are amazing..
I slack on posting my updated work in here.
Think I will pose a couple pictures now though.

I let my invite sit a couple days but I just started in this guild so I was just browsing... Didn't pay attention to how old this was xD  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:37 am
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I thought 1,2, and 4 were amazing mrgreen 3 & 5 were pretty good too but not up to par with the other 3. All around though I think you aced it (whatever it is that you could of aced, not sure it just seemed like the thing to say)...


xd
Well, these are pretty old sweatdrop
So I dont see how any of them are amazing..
I slack on posting my updated work in here.
Think I will pose a couple pictures now though.

I let my invite sit a couple days but I just started in this guild so I was just browsing... Didn't pay attention to how old this was xD


Its all right, i love hearing comments anyway xd
Posted two, more recent drawings up, but surprisingly.. some fanart ended up looking better than those two (I love my Circus Boy whee )  

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 12:31 pm
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I don't think I can tell you how long ago those ones were drawn xd
Thanks, ^.^ glad you liked them feel free to check out my da (link in siggy) for some more recent stuff if you really want as well sweatdrop  

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 12:56 pm
Vanna1994
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I don't think I can tell you how long ago those ones were drawn xd
Thanks, ^.^ glad you liked them feel free to check out my da (link in siggy) for some more recent stuff if you really want as well sweatdrop

*clicks link*
Wow...Well that escalated quickly eek Thats great improvement! Keep at it!  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 21, 2014 1:07 pm
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I don't think I can tell you how long ago those ones were drawn xd
Thanks, ^.^ glad you liked them feel free to check out my da (link in siggy) for some more recent stuff if you really want as well sweatdrop

*clicks link*
Wow...Well that escalated quickly eek Thats great improvement! Keep at it!


Thank you very much ^.^  

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2015 12:39 am
Vanna1994
Looks like this place hasnt been touched since last time I was in here (barley that is) sweatdrop
Two of my male oc's ten years younger making them 7 and 11. The 11 year old is laying down the 7 year-old is ontop of him. Having lower body troubles.. and angle troubles..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-109.jpg

Except these ones, there just catching up in case anyone is actually interested in looking at any of my art: (from most recent, to least recent or so)
Last one I did, never finished updateing it..
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-103.jpg

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-101.jpg Never finished background.

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-92.jpg Never updated the one with his face, but I cant stand how his face turned out. I love drawing his hair though ^^

http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-85.jpg I named him Jayce xd

and thats all I want to post sweatdrop

(quoting me gets my attention more, otherwise I tend to forgot. Ima Slacker scream )
nuff drama for now though biggrin

Two more ^^
I love him mrgreen
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-169.jpg
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-168.jpg

I think you should work on your anatomy, the poses are kind of awkward and so are the facial expressions. The final results of the drawings are kinda smeared as well, i should suggest you put a paper underneath your hand as you draw to prevent that. When you begin a drawing, draw very lightly so when you erase, traces of unwanted lines won't be shown. May i also suggest shading, shading really brings an art to life. ^^  
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