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 Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 5:59 pm
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"The Color White"
By Flare Kazamata
It's Emptiness
Is Filled with uniqueness
Its colorless
And it hides its own sadness
It is Invisible at first sight
Yet a helpful light
That will guide the human eyesight
Through the dark filled night
The color itself is invisible
It acts like a living riddle
Some claim its evil
But it is ever so helpful
Among the coast
Wonders the pale ghost
Although it only exist
In reality as a mist
This color is still ready to assist
Cuz among the rest, it is the bravest
Never known
It walks alone
Like a stray dog, Looking for a bone
Like a dense fog, Just there but unknown
The color itself is Unrecognized
But this is no surprise
Because kindness in the form ever so true,
Is to support, and not expect a thank you
To work, and require no pay
It is those actions that make peoples day
But such colors will never understand
How to live in a world, where you are banned
So here alone this color shall stand,
Ready to fight.
It shall rise shining as bright as the moonlight
This hero will make its own spotlight
The colorless will represent the colors
The colorless will stand against the numbers
Today ends the countless suffer
Cuz it is fate this color is trying to alter
So lets support this loyal knight
Lets start to recognize the color white
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I got this idea from a different topic in the poetry forums, It hard
The color is not annoying is it? I decided to take a different approach at this poem, I will take it off, if its a problem.
Anyways if you like it , Suggest me to do more poetry.
Lol sorry, I was bored. Comments, questions blah blah blah.
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:08 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:09 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:10 pm
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Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame crying crying That...was...beautiful! *glomps* Heh, Thanks ^^. I should do more poetry than.
You should. Well done...now I want to throw out some of my poetry xD |
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:11 pm
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XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame crying crying That...was...beautiful! *glomps* Heh, Thanks ^^. I should do more poetry than. You should. Well done...now I want to throw out some of my poetry xD
Nah Don't do that O_o; |
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:17 pm
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Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame crying crying That...was...beautiful! *glomps* Heh, Thanks ^^. I should do more poetry than. You should. Well done...now I want to throw out some of my poetry xD Nah Don't do that O_o;
Huh?? *looks at my previous reply* Oohh I said that wrong xD I meant post it on Gaia xD |
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:17 pm
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XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame crying crying That...was...beautiful! *glomps* Heh, Thanks ^^. I should do more poetry than. You should. Well done...now I want to throw out some of my poetry xD Nah Don't do that O_o; Huh?? *looks at my previous reply* Oohh I said that wrong xD I meant post it on Gaia xD
Oh ok, Good. |
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:18 pm
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Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame Flare Kazamata XSK Phrozenflame crying crying That...was...beautiful! *glomps* Heh, Thanks ^^. I should do more poetry than. You should. Well done...now I want to throw out some of my poetry xD Nah Don't do that O_o; Huh?? *looks at my previous reply* Oohh I said that wrong xD I meant post it on Gaia xD Oh ok, Good.
rofl |
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:36 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:55 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:07 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:24 pm
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Flare Kazamata Vendaval de la Luz I thought this was nice...you did a wonderful job on it and, like I said in my vote, the colors really helped make it stand out. Thank you for the critique, I shall consider it for my next colorful poems if I write them. I was thinking of writing a poem on each color, I started with white because of something in an anime. C2 from Code Geass said "Snow is white because it forgot what color it was" Then Zero was like "I dont know why Snow is white, But I still think its beautiful." And from there I had to speak for the beauty of the color, to let it be recognized.
Go for it...I'd like to read them. |
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