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 Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:36 pm
Phwee!! This is my first post on here! biggrin I just wanted to know what you guys think of my picture. The bottom one isn't done yet. sweatdrop When I finish it I'll put it on. 
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 12:49 pm
Your lines are pretty cool. I like the hair and eyes on your character, as well as the clean lines.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2006 1:23 pm
Very good, i can't draw guys like that. If i try, then they just turn into girls..lol.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 3:37 pm
*nods* I have the same problem. Though, I actually managed to make one that looked like a slightly girlie guy. But.....it looked like his butt was on the front ><
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 6:11 pm
He's so cute, I love his expression on the bottom and his hair!
Your style reminds me of Gravitation. <3
His chin on the top picture looks a little off though, like it comes down to far.
Wai! But other then that it's beautiful.
Did I mention he's cute? xDD;;
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 12:28 pm
MooMooJuice He's so cute, I love his expression on the bottom and his hair! Your style reminds me of Gravitation. <3 His chin on the top picture looks a little off though, like it comes down to far. Wai! But other then that it's beautiful. Did I mention he's cute? xDD;; Thanks I'm glad you like him and yeah, his chin does come down a little bit. I never seen or heard of Gravitation. Hmm...
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:59 pm
MooMooJuice He's so cute, I love his expression on the bottom and his hair! Your style reminds me of Gravitation. <3 His chin on the top picture looks a little off though, like it comes down to far. Wai! But other then that it's beautiful. Did I mention he's cute? xDD;; i think the chin on the top one is fine and pleeeeez tell me u r a grl with a guy avi xd
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 2:24 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:29 am
Wow... I really like that pic ^_^ It's very good! Can't wait to see the finished one! Love you way you draw the hair especially.
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:42 am
Really awesome looking, the pencil sketching makes it look like true art, but I'd bet it would be even better colored!
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:00 pm
Saffra Really awesome looking, the pencil sketching makes it look like true art, but I'd bet it would be even better colored! Heh heh, thanks. It probably would look nice colored but I don't think I will. Who knows.
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:34 pm
I like how you drew the hair and wrinkles in the clothing. They make it look so realistic. heart
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 4:06 pm
hotness heart i like the folds u drew in his clothing ^^ so realistic MooMooJuice His chin on the top picture looks a little off though, like it comes down to far. i agree with moomoo. if his chin was slighly higher, he would look even better 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:57 pm
Nice to see someone new posting stuff.
The neck on the bottom one is tappering down; the top part of the neck is correctly placed; it simple connects to the chest in the chest in wrong spot.
His arms are way too short; definatly increase the length and watch out next time. I mess up proportions too if I space out too much.
The fabric at his shoulders is cinching together in a far too pronounced fashion if that just supposed to be a normal dress shirt (button up shirt).
In fact, shirts of that kind for guys usually pop out a little there, to help defin the shoulders. Checking out fashion magazines is a great way to find new ways to fit your charecters clothes.
Little nitpick stuff; cuff is too stiff, book perspective is wrong, pocket is two dimensional, fabric is too smoth across his chest, cuff is two-dimensional.
Gentleman, BEHOLD; praise. Awesome charecter with lovely playful hair; that looks oh so soft. You have an incredibly good sense of line; they're all fast, expressive, and bold. You have a very good sense of the way folds move, though there a bit too many for the type of fabric he's wearing. His positioning is well down, and is in no way stiff or unnatural. Great stuff.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 9:42 am
wow i didn't even notice half that stuff until you said it....
anyways my thoughts:: I LUV it!! if you ever wanna do avi art for me just let me know whee i would pay! i think this picture is awesome! i love the look in his eyes! keep learning and keep drawing you could make a living off of this if you keep this up 3nodding
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