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 Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:33 pm
Finally something of mine that is left uncolored! ^.^ Though I think they lack alot of work.. They will need to be redone..
Here's what I have so far..
(Please do not steal these..)
(Zhen and Kenta from my manga. ^.^ Don't They look cute together.? ^.^)
My own critique: I already know that there are alot of anatomy problems, let alone with all the other problems..
Mainly Zhen's arm, and the placement of all the other things.. >.< I can't draw guys. >.<
I also know that Zhen's forehead is too small.. and the hair line is off.. >..< And the face and the eyes.. >>
(Please give me a break with this, I've been drawing Anime/Manga style for less than a year.. V.V Though It would be really nice if you could be harsh with the crit to give me a more of an understanding on what I need to fix other than what I already noticed.. Though I know that Kenta's head is messed up. Once again.. >.< Can't draw guys.. )
(Random Dragon.. I free Sketched this.. >.< I don't know how to draw dragons but I already know that the foot is messed up and some of the other spots on it are really badly drawn)
Please post your crits or constructive crits here.. ^.^
- [~Lam~]
p.s. I had to get these onto my comp through the digital camera, that is why it looks odd. Hopefully I can get the scanner to work again. ^.^
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 5:00 pm
I think you have great talent. Great job i love your dragon.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:20 pm
they are very well done
when it comes to your people... you should work a little on the eyes... it looks as if they are dead inside
and as for the dragon hmm somethings is up with his face but I can't put my finger on it... hmmm well great job any way
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:41 pm
I heart the dragon
Try to fix your guys shoulders, they look a little to broad.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:10 pm
Thanks, Alright, so The shoulders of the Guy are too broad.. I notice the part of the eyes and there's something funny with the dragon.. Got it.. ^.^ Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 2:43 pm
nice pair biggrin ok letsee...for the girl: nose can be lower. what expression are u trying to draw? if u want her to have those "cool" people face, eyes can be thinner and mouth a lil wider with a slight frown. if she's a happy girl, broader smile. right now, she has a blank expression. shrug.
for guy and girl: neck can be shorter and shift shoulders up
overall, nice job Lam. i'm looking forward to your future pics ^^
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 4:13 pm
Alright, So I need work with expression, and some anatomy problems with the guy's shoulders/neck..
Thanks
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 7:33 am
[~Lam~] Alright, So I need work with expression, and some anatomy problems with the guy's shoulders/neck.. Thanks no problem smile by the way, i love that black kitty on your avi 4laugh
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 9:37 am
it seems like the dragons face is being drawn in two different perspectives...that may just be me though...as for the people I love the girl's dress and their weapons but I feel like the girl needs something in her hair...like a ribbon...once again that may just be me xd
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Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 4:17 pm
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