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 Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:14 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:01 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:27 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:08 pm
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I am absolutely fascinated with the shell photo, I cant figure out exactly what it is about the photo (be it composition, subject, color..) but I love it!
I think the flower shot from below is a great concept (I have done it with some mushrooms myself) but I think it would be a greater success if more of the flower was in the frame, and maybe some more of the flowers color (right now it reads as more of a silhouette), but I wouldn't try to make it as vibrant a color as the photo from the top.
The bottom photo confuses me. I fell lie you are trying to have some kind of narrative (maybe about the place this was taken), but there is just so much stuff in the frame that i'm just paying attention to all the things, and wondering why they are here, and why you would take a picture of it? maybe if the depth of field was much more shallow, and you focused on only one or two items, and the rest were blurred, then i could focus more on what the idea/story was rather then looking at all the stuff. Just an idea...
Keep it up!
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Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:40 am
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minimishi I am absolutely fascinated with the shell photo, I cant figure out exactly what it is about the photo (be it composition, subject, color..) but I love it! I think the flower shot from below is a great concept (I have done it with some mushrooms myself) but I think it would be a greater success if more of the flower was in the frame, and maybe some more of the flowers color (right now it reads as more of a silhouette), but I wouldn't try to make it as vibrant a color as the photo from the top. The bottom photo confuses me. I fell lie you are trying to have some kind of narrative (maybe about the place this was taken), but there is just so much stuff in the frame that i'm just paying attention to all the things, and wondering why they are here, and why you would take a picture of it? maybe if the depth of field was much more shallow, and you focused on only one or two items, and the rest were blurred, then i could focus more on what the idea/story was rather then looking at all the stuff. Just an idea... Keep it up!
Ohmy. emotion_kirakira
Thank you for the suggestions and critics!
I definitely would try it next time. :dowiant:
I just took it randomly, the last picture. Haha.
Even myself don't know what it is about. lol
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