I need feed back on my furry art ><

[My darling Deer]

Okay~ here it is



The male was orginally my best friend Alex's fursona name Cain but he died on Halloween so he let me have Cain still kinda sad when I was drawing him  

[Cinna101]

well i like it >_<
all i can say is, it could use some color  

[X-Yami-no-Ko-X]

One of the things I noticed was it seems like the lines don't really connect when you're "drawing through" something. Like her skirt where the chain is.

Hands and feet look like they're a weak area. Something to be aware of.

Also her leg. The knee looks like it has a weird shape to it.

The hand going between her legs looks like it just gets cut off because of the placement. It looks like its sitting on the pelvic area not going in front of it. Also her arm near her elbow looks like it has a weird shape to it.

Then heading back up. As a suggestion you might want to add the lines of the feathers in her wings to give it better shape.

Then her ears. It looks like both of them are on the right side of her head.

That's just some of the things I noticed.  

[My darling Deer]

Cinna101

well i like it >_<
all i can say is, it could use some color

Doing that now! XD I'm gonna post the flat coloring then I'm trying to shade witch I hate DX  

[My darling Deer]

X-Yami-no-Ko-X

One of the things I noticed was it seems like the lines don't really connect when you're "drawing through" something. Like her skirt where the chain is.

Hands and feet look like they're a weak area. Something to be aware of.

Also her leg. The knee looks like it has a weird shape to it.

The hand going between her legs looks like it just gets cut off because of the placement. It looks like its sitting on the pelvic area not going in front of it. Also her arm near her elbow looks like it has a weird shape to it.

Then heading back up. As a suggestion you might want to add the lines of the feathers in her wings to give it better shape.

Then her ears. It looks like both of them are on the right side of her head.

That's just some of the things I noticed.

Okay thanks I used a base as a ref cause I draw it on paper then take a picture with my camera (I know horrible), And I have no idea on how to draw hands or chains ._.  

[X-Yami-no-Ko-X]

Painful_Sarrow

X-Yami-no-Ko-X

One of the things I noticed was it seems like the lines don't really connect when you're "drawing through" something. Like her skirt where the chain is.

Hands and feet look like they're a weak area. Something to be aware of.

Also her leg. The knee looks like it has a weird shape to it.

The hand going between her legs looks like it just gets cut off because of the placement. It looks like its sitting on the pelvic area not going in front of it. Also her arm near her elbow looks like it has a weird shape to it.

Then heading back up. As a suggestion you might want to add the lines of the feathers in her wings to give it better shape.

Then her ears. It looks like both of them are on the right side of her head.

That's just some of the things I noticed.

Okay thanks I used a base as a ref cause I draw it on paper then take a picture with my camera (I know horrible), And I have no idea on how to draw hands or chains ._.

Just take a look at tutorials or pictures of the actual object and just work on drawing them. It takes practice.  

[My darling Deer]

X-Yami-no-Ko-X

Painful_Sarrow

X-Yami-no-Ko-X

One of the things I noticed was it seems like the lines don't really connect when you're "drawing through" something. Like her skirt where the chain is.

Hands and feet look like they're a weak area. Something to be aware of.

Also her leg. The knee looks like it has a weird shape to it.

The hand going between her legs looks like it just gets cut off because of the placement. It looks like its sitting on the pelvic area not going in front of it. Also her arm near her elbow looks like it has a weird shape to it.

Then heading back up. As a suggestion you might want to add the lines of the feathers in her wings to give it better shape.

Then her ears. It looks like both of them are on the right side of her head.

That's just some of the things I noticed.

Okay thanks I used a base as a ref cause I draw it on paper then take a picture with my camera (I know horrible), And I have no idea on how to draw hands or chains ._.

Just take a look at tutorials or pictures of the actual object and just work on drawing them. It takes practice.

Alright!  

[My darling Deer]

Here's an edit of the line art....... finshed it and I'm gonna color it and hope i can shade it I need tips ><

 

[My darling Deer]

Here's the finshed coloring and shading I used paint tool sai and I think it's pretty good for my first try any tips please tell me!



And I put a watermark there cause I don't trust people on DA and someone told me to put a watermark down on it  

[Dark-Velvet-Revolver]

ToxicArtistXx

Here's the finshed coloring and shading I used paint tool sai and I think it's pretty good for my first try any tips please tell me!



And I put a watermark there cause I don't trust people on DA and someone told me to put a watermark down on it

there could have been a few more shades in the shading and the hair looks flat but it looks really nice otherwise biggrin  

[My darling Deer]

Dark-Velvet-Revolver

Thankies!