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Icarus Fallen

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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:49 am

Hope you enjoy!

Comment and Critiques always appreciated, no matter how harsh. I want to be a better artist, after all. Sorry if they seem huge and long, they are all optimized around 50-100kb, so they shouldn't take ages to load. Oh, I specifically want crits on the last picture, of the guy with the cigarette. That is something I am currently coloring, and any help will be appreciated. I posted all that other stuff to kill two birds with one stone.

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and finally, something I'm in the middle of working on.
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 2:23 am

Wow, you have a beautiful style with sketching and detail, a really high level, I'm particualy taken with the first image, simply because of the abandoned rose, I cant explain why, but to me, it adds a whole new depth to the over all image.
On your last image I think you'll need to be very careful with the shading, too much and it will look overcrowed and you'll lose the rumples in the shirt, but too few will leave him looking unfinished.

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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 11:38 pm

Ah, thank you very much ^^! I agree, I'm trying my best not to make my picture too busy...I want it to remain a bit cartoonish and stay stark. I might even darken some of the black lines on the outer edge to bring it out more. Thanks for the comments! I still have a long way to improve...I'm not high level yet!

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:31 am

Wow, they are very good! Excellent job!

Just a little note on the last one, you should work a bit on the fingers and the cigarette, as now he doesn't seem to be holding the cigarette (but rather the cigarette seems to be "floating"), but his fingers are a bit too wide apart.

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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:34 am

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Ah, thank you very much ^^! I agree, I'm trying my best not to make my picture too busy...I want it to remain a bit cartoonish and stay stark. I might even darken some of the black lines on the outer edge to bring it out more. Thanks for the comments! I still have a long way to improve...I'm not high level yet!

I actually went on Deviant and put the first one in my favourites I was so taken with it ^_^
We're all improving at least we are all helping each other : )

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