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SARSSS

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 3:59 pm
POEM TIME.
: D.
x DDD.


We stare dead straight into an oblivion.
Looking into the storm's eye.
In another time, place, reality.
We watch the smog set into their sky.

We ponder of those we hurt.
I've memorized their faces in my mind, but they've gone, murderously turned black.
And wonder of those we've ever loved.
As a swirling, unanswering oblivion stares at us back.

There's no one else here.
Who'd stand to watch me stumble.
We used to have hearts, our one was our all.
And we leave it behind, to decay with time, to let it crumble.

We sing out to the oblivion.
Of promises never broken and our wildest dreams.
We've unleashed them, thinking it's for the better.
But they've burned themselves to my memory, it seems...

We stare dead straight into an oblivion.
Looking into the storm's eye.
In another time, place, reality.
We watch the smog set into their sunset.


LOLOLOL.
SUXXXORRZZZZ.
And you guys had better not stealies.
l<.
I know some [not all] of you are meaniepants like that.
 
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:05 pm
You know I really liked that.
You've made good use of the opening stanza by repeating it with the imagery of the sunset at the end.

Good job.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 3:30 pm
Wow.
I really like!
So great...
: ]
 
PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:18 am
I concur

it is

t3h b3au71ful.  

Emo_Darth_Vader


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 9:28 am
is that really a life issue..
i think not !
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 3:42 pm
LOL.
It's not.
But I can post it if I want to.
O:
PWNPWNPWN.

And it's based off a life issue.
SO.
MORE PWN.
LOLOLOLOL.
 

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